Just your normal,everyday weirdo! A pony fan in love with all things pop culture, Including but not limited to,Video games,Anime,andYoutube! I am just learning how to write so all comments are great!
Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle said after they got married that they looked forward to the day when they had a foal. But after years of being in a happy marriage with no baby, They had forgotten about having one. Until Pinkie finds out that she's pregnant.
Well, I wonder how this will work out.
Two chapters.The reveal, and the birth.
( Contains Twinkie Pie and has brief mentions of sex, but nothing specific of course.)
( Also mentions of alcohol.)
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Aww what an adorable story
6902083 AWWW! THANK YOU!!! I'm super glad that you like the story! But remember that there's still two chapters left!
6902222 BELIEVE IT! (sorry.) And thank you, I'm glad you liked It! I was worried that people wouldn't since it's a bit sappy and disorganized. But it will be neater in future chapters. ( But the sap will probably stick around, Not that that's a bad thing.
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While this story could use a good deal of polishing, I admit, it does have a lot of heart behind it. So with that... I'll give a thumbs up, and I'll be tracking it to see where it goes from here.
6902637 Thank you! And also, I know that I'm not the best writer. I'm a LOT better at writing scripts, trust me. I imagine all my stories in visuals, so it's kinda hard for me to describe every thing and make it sound nice. But I mostly just write for fun and the fact that I come up with SO MANY STORY IDEAS. (And the next chapters won't be as disorganized as the first one, I promise.) So thanks for tracking!
6902664 Not to worry, writing is a skill, not a trait. With all skills, you learn how to improve with time. Being on this site for almost two years, I've learn a great deal about creative writing, and how to use the comments that point out plot holes in your stories to your advantage. What you have here is passion. As long as you have that, and willing to learn from past mistakes, you'll go far.
6902698 Thank you. That means a lot to me :)
6902411 That is true, look forward to more
uuuuhhhhhh....whatever at least there is a reason
Well I admit I like it more, if it doesn´t just happens because they love each other, and then pregnant, but it´s a bit like in some of those old fairy tales. What I mean with that is, it is a bit strange but nice. Maybe it was just because the whole chapter nearly focused on Pinkie, and her pregnancy test.
6903752 Well, I didn't come up with that. It's a theory that since equestria appears to be female dominant, That was how the population didn't go down.
Also I just thought the idea of Twilight and Pinkie being a less-fertile couple was interesting, even though it didn't have much baring on the plot.
6904585 The idea is fine, just something new I haven´t read yet.
I´m one of those persons, that believe, only because they showed mostly femalse till now, doesn´t have to mean anything. you could say I still believe at what I haven´t seen yet. If there is a Village with a bunch of Females, why shouldn´t there be a Stallion Village as well?
Never thought about it that much, but it would be a bit strange for me if "Lauren" was it? they really wanted to compare a Fantasy Character to real horses, and how it maybe works in reallife, it´s only what I hear from time to time.
At least that is a reason, where the females doesn´t have to share a Stallion.
Well this story has good ideas but those all caps like LOVE just throws me out of it and the words in (those ones I don't know what they called) is weird is it really important to have those? But other then some rushed moments it was a good first chapter I hope to see their wedding or hear the story about it but good job
6914324 Thanks for the input! Also:
1. Sorry about the caps. I personally have a strange sense of humor and thought it was funny.
2. I'm not sure what you mean by that.
3. There is probably not going to be much talk about the wedding. It's just not what this story is about.
But, I will recommend a cute story about their wedding by Rated Ponystar! It's one of my favorites!
ComputerGlitch88 i have a question for you
By the power invested in me, myself and I (since this story hasn't updated for six months), I declare this story to be dead.
May it forever rest in peace.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
I totally ship twipie.
PS- drunk twilight is awesome twilight.