What is in a smile? The best adversity against enemies is a smile, such is the only weapon for those so overwhelmed by that we cannot control. Pinkie Pie has smiled, the afterthought of a perpetual smiler never scratching beyond the surface meaning of a smile. When a pony who knows of the Pinkie Pie who didn't even realize the surface value of a smile comes into Ponyville, Pinkie Pie will realize the true value of a smile and with it comes the pride of something with weakness in its core... the will to overcome again.
Big credits to the artist, who let me use his artwork, *Jamey4 as known on deviantart.
His deviantart page:
http://jamey4.deviantart.com/
I'd like to say it's my first ever time writing for an audience that wasn't my English teacher, but I don't particularly want that weighing on you guys. Basically, I want you guys to give constructive criticism but I want it to be because of my writing abilities and the fact you want this to continue and not the fact that this is my first fanfic.
Oh god that's a little scary.
But it's decent, and I can't wait to read more.
...What?
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Usually, when someone goes "...What?", it's the most common word for the sentiment of "what did I just read?"
Any problems, comments or/and questions?
Prologue is good, I'll comment on the next chapter when I read it.
It really draws you in, if you're curious, and it's explained what they are, it suddenly becomes a lot more interesting, and I really and truly cannot wait for more.
Please master?
I would go on, but spoilers and whatnot.
Hmmmm... Confusing, but mysterious and cool.