How about just leaving this as "Incomplete," and writing a chapter for it whenever. Please?

6949688 Cause it is a commissioned piece, and I didn't expect to ever be writing a second chapter.

6949890 Could still ask the commissioner if it's ok to keep expanding on it occasionally.

"that cock" is a bit overused.

other than that...perfect juicy fun

6956907 Alas, there aren't many words for it besides cock, dick, penis, yeah...

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i'm not saying the word itself is overused (though it might be), but it being mostly used in combination with "that".

6959033 Aaahh. That I can definitely see as being an issue

6959035 Member, penis, cock, dick, boner, loveslab, Twilight's joystick, shaft, genitals, anal impaler, love muscle, pecker, third leg, schlong.. the list goes on and on in my vocabulary.

6961772 Thank you. I'll remember a few of those, believe it or not.

6961790 If you need more, feel free to ask or pm me.

I hope sunset gives it to twilight in the ass. that would be hot

Damn this is pretty entertaining sex life these 2 have. Hopefully a new chapter is coming soon.

Is it still incomplete?

Yes, Twilight, you are.