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Other than a Cybertronian writing utensil, I am an avid brony that is partial to writing novice-level stories whenever an idea pops into my head, whether I like it, or not. It's mostly the latter.

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Let's see where this goes. Have a fav and a like.

6601661 Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.

6601695 Gladly. Sunlight is my second fav ship :trixieshiftright:

This sounds really good so far. I can't wait for more.

I hope Sunset will tell Twilight how she feels. Poor Sunset is very nervous.

ROTFL poor Sunny she is not going to sleep that night with a half naked Innocent Twilight sleeping next to her.

:rainbowlaugh: hang in there Sunset you will come out on top in the end:twilightsmile:

6603737 Heh. On top.

Heh...

Urgh, my dirty mind.

6603740 .... Hu? I don't..... OH I GET IT ROTFL
I didn't even notice that lol. I guess I have no room to talk about being Innocent huu :rainbowlaugh:

Oh boy. Sunset will indeed have a hard time sleeping with Twilight.

Yeah, no, she's not getting any sleep tonight. With luck, neither of them will!

Poor Sunny. I hope that a sleepless night helps her think on how and when to confess. It should be during breakfast.

Ms. lovah, lovah... Ms Boombastic, Telefantastic... Ooohhhh.... Me likey.


Smoooth~:twilightblush:

Interesting take on this. Rather angsty but that seems to be the point.

6603740 Glorious Lesbian Sex scene confirmed.

This is great, waiting for the next chapter :D

Like, hate, flame! Comment! It's all good.

I'm gonna flame ya! *Lits bonfire and takes a seat* Wanna join me?

Definitely hooked by this. Hits that sweet spot between dread and hope that makes it hard to wait for the next chapter. I have to know what happens next!

Poor Sunset. Can't say the words that could make all her torment go away.

GODDAMN FUCKING TYPOS. Corrected. Well. One's I can see right now. I apologize. I suck ass.

I'm not so sure I like this chapter.

Really? I thought it was alright.

Though I wonder why Sunset couldn't just go to the bathroom to handle her "business"?

6673739 She's silly like that~

Convenient plot device maybe... :ajbemused: I know. I'm so predictable.

FINALLY!

I mean... I'm glad Sunset finally (indirectly) told Twilight she likes her... I can't wait to see how this plays out!

Oh boy. I wonder how Twilight will react?

Well, I enjoyed it, if that helps.

Well, perhaps not the ideal way to go about that Sunny.

6673718 don't sell yourself short, that's why we have proofreaders!

I think it worked for me, I really could sort of see just how torn sunset is. Nicely done.

Oooh, how will Twilight respond to THAT?

I like it. It's all screwed up.

Using masturbation to move the ship forward... awkward, but novel. I did like this chapter, still, especially with the cliffhanger ending. Excited to see what comes next!

Sunset you done goofed now... :facehoof: Great chapter though. :twilightsmile:

See Sunset, this is why you have to be careful with instantaneous communication. I still get "recall" emails every now and then... Seriously, has that ever served any purpose other than as a blinking neon sign saying "READ THIS NOW, GOOD STUFF IN HERE"?

I like to think that in some dimension, twilight and sunset are both the same person, kind of lie Jekyll and Hyde, and flare feather's portrait just helps with that thought. I mean, someone has to have made a fanfic where Twilight created or messed up a spell that caused her to become Sunset Shimmer and recasting the the spell would change her back. They could have also made a fanfic about Twilight and Sunset being light/dark soul mates or something.

Aaaaagh! I'm one of those people who cringes really hard when I know something bad's going to happen, so this whole chapter I just read a line then had to run screaming and make tea. Over and over. I currently have 12 cups in my room. I loved it, really I did, but the awkwardness of the situation is killing me. Good luck to Sunset here... I would not like to be in her place.

That author's note, though.:rainbowlaugh:
Can you finish this? I'm enjoying it

'Bout bloody time, eh?

Nice descriptions. Just wish it was longer. Alas, we'll wait for the next update!

6866232 I do apologize for it. I never expected the story to take off in terms of attention so I am/was resolute to short chapters when/if I could. I know some people find that kind of shizz but... ah well, I have no choice. I can barely not think about food than shipping ponies. X_X

You're a dad? Awesome, man! And hey, chapter's short but sweet, mate! Neato!

I'm glad you finally updated. I can't wait for more.

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