• Member Since 17th Feb, 2014
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Other than a Cybertronian writing utensil, I am an avid brony that is partial to writing novice-level stories whenever an idea pops into my head, whether I like it, or not. It's mostly the latter.

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Let's see where this goes. Have a fav and a like.

6601661 Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.

6601695 Gladly. Sunlight is my second fav ship :trixieshiftright:

This sounds really good so far. I can't wait for more.

I hope Sunset will tell Twilight how she feels. Poor Sunset is very nervous.

ROTFL poor Sunny she is not going to sleep that night with a half naked Innocent Twilight sleeping next to her.

:rainbowlaugh: hang in there Sunset you will come out on top in the end:twilightsmile:

6603737 Heh. On top.


Urgh, my dirty mind.

6603740 .... Hu? I don't..... OH I GET IT ROTFL
I didn't even notice that lol. I guess I have no room to talk about being Innocent huu :rainbowlaugh:

Oh boy. Sunset will indeed have a hard time sleeping with Twilight.

Yeah, no, she's not getting any sleep tonight. With luck, neither of them will!

Poor Sunny. I hope that a sleepless night helps her think on how and when to confess. It should be during breakfast.

Ms. lovah, lovah... Ms Boombastic, Telefantastic... Ooohhhh.... Me likey.


Interesting take on this. Rather angsty but that seems to be the point.

6603740 Glorious Lesbian Sex scene confirmed.

This is great, waiting for the next chapter :D

Like, hate, flame! Comment! It's all good.

I'm gonna flame ya! *Lits bonfire and takes a seat* Wanna join me?

Definitely hooked by this. Hits that sweet spot between dread and hope that makes it hard to wait for the next chapter. I have to know what happens next!

Poor Sunset. Can't say the words that could make all her torment go away.

GODDAMN FUCKING TYPOS. Corrected. Well. One's I can see right now. I apologize. I suck ass.

I'm not so sure I like this chapter.

Really? I thought it was alright.

Though I wonder why Sunset couldn't just go to the bathroom to handle her "business"?

6673739 She's silly like that~

Convenient plot device maybe... :ajbemused: I know. I'm so predictable.


I mean... I'm glad Sunset finally (indirectly) told Twilight she likes her... I can't wait to see how this plays out!

Oh boy. I wonder how Twilight will react?

Well, I enjoyed it, if that helps.

Well, perhaps not the ideal way to go about that Sunny.

6673718 don't sell yourself short, that's why we have proofreaders!

I think it worked for me, I really could sort of see just how torn sunset is. Nicely done.

Oooh, how will Twilight respond to THAT?

I like it. It's all screwed up.

Using masturbation to move the ship forward... awkward, but novel. I did like this chapter, still, especially with the cliffhanger ending. Excited to see what comes next!

Sunset you done goofed now... :facehoof: Great chapter though. :twilightsmile:

See Sunset, this is why you have to be careful with instantaneous communication. I still get "recall" emails every now and then... Seriously, has that ever served any purpose other than as a blinking neon sign saying "READ THIS NOW, GOOD STUFF IN HERE"?

I like to think that in some dimension, twilight and sunset are both the same person, kind of lie Jekyll and Hyde, and flare feather's portrait just helps with that thought. I mean, someone has to have made a fanfic where Twilight created or messed up a spell that caused her to become Sunset Shimmer and recasting the the spell would change her back. They could have also made a fanfic about Twilight and Sunset being light/dark soul mates or something.

Aaaaagh! I'm one of those people who cringes really hard when I know something bad's going to happen, so this whole chapter I just read a line then had to run screaming and make tea. Over and over. I currently have 12 cups in my room. I loved it, really I did, but the awkwardness of the situation is killing me. Good luck to Sunset here... I would not like to be in her place.

That author's note, though.:rainbowlaugh:
Can you finish this? I'm enjoying it

'Bout bloody time, eh?

Nice descriptions. Just wish it was longer. Alas, we'll wait for the next update!

6866232 I do apologize for it. I never expected the story to take off in terms of attention so I am/was resolute to short chapters when/if I could. I know some people find that kind of shizz but... ah well, I have no choice. I can barely not think about food than shipping ponies. X_X

You're a dad? Awesome, man! And hey, chapter's short but sweet, mate! Neato!

I'm glad you finally updated. I can't wait for more.

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