• Published 17th Mar 2016
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I'm Fluttershy!? - Grassy Blade



One day I woke up in Equestria in Fluttershy's body!

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Day 1: Pleasant Surprise

Day 1

09/27/2016

Fluttershy's cottage

I arched my back and stretched my wings trying to wake up. 'Wait, wings?' I thought. I tried to remember what
had happened yesterday. 'Oh yeah, I'm in Equestria...' I rubbed my eyes with my hooves, and felt some kind of soft
fabric over my eyes. 'That's strange, why is this here?' I wondered. I opened my eyes, but all I could see is black.

:fluttershysad:'Morning Kevin.'

'Morning Fluttershy.'

:fluttershysad:'What's going on? I can't see a thing!'

'I was wondering the same thing.'

I pushed the fabric off my eyes.

"Hi there!" said a familiar voice.

:fluttershbad:'Aah!'

'Ah!'

I looked left and right but I saw nobody but Angel in his bunny bed.

"Huh?"

"Up here!"

I looked up to see a pink pony hanging from the ceiling with plungers on her hooves.

:fluttershbad:'Ah!!'

"Aaaahhh!!"

:pinkiegasp:"Aaaaahhhh!"

I fell off the bed with a THUD.

"Wakey wakey sleepyhead!"

'That pony is so random!'

"Pinkie Pie what are you doing here?! You scared the feathers right off of me!"

"I can't tell you that! That would spoil the secret!"

'What the hay is she talking about?'

"Now put your blindfold back on! I have a surprise for you!" she said covering my eyes with the fabric
and pushing me downstairs and out the door. I could tell because of the way the ground felt.

'What could she have planned for me? Think Kevin think!' My mind still needed time to
fully wake up, so I couldn't think straight.
"Pinkie, where are we going?!" I shouted "I don't trust anypony to push me around blindly!"
'Did I REALLY just say that? These equestrian terms are getting to me!'

"You'll see!" She said pushing me to who knows where.


Location:

??????????????????

Pinkie finally stopped pushing me. The air felt a little colder and the ground felt smooth, so I must be inside.
I felt my blindfold come off, and the light invaded my pupils. I had a few seconds to adjust to the light.

'Where am I? Why did Pinkie drag me all the way here? Wait... Please don't tell me this is what I think this-'


"Surprise!" exclaimed at least 30 ponies, maybe more...

:fluttershbad:'Aah!'

'Aaannd... it is...'

Pinkie ran off and came back with a bunch of instruments 3 seconds later.
And then she began to sing.....

"Are you seri-"

"Happy, Happy birthday! Your day is filled with cheer!"

"Happy, Happy birthday! I'm really glad you're here!"

With a smile Pinkie got in my face, so I backed my head away. 'Okay...'

"Happy, Happy birthday! We smile when you arrive!"

"On your special day I'll make you, THE HAPPIEST PONY ALIVE!!!"

Pinkie then jumps high into the air while several confetti cannons fired, shooting out confetti and streamers.

As her song finished, I couldn't help myself from laughing.

"P-P-Pinkie Pie!! What is all this!?" I asked in laughter.

"Well duh!" said Pinkie with a frown, which returned to a smile. "It's your Happy Birthday Party!
Well actually it was originally a Welcome to Ponyville Party, but when you said today was your birthday
I had to change the banner to Welcome to Ponyville/Birthday Party"

"Um thanks, but I'm not really into birthdays anymore."

"WHAT!?" shouted Pinkie who was apparently sensitive about my statement. "How, how? HOW do you not like birthday parties?!"

"I don't know," I said "I just don't see the point of birthdays anymore."

"You mean I planned this entire party for nothing!?"

"No, I didn't say that. I will gladly enjoy this party!" Pinkies eyes lit up with excitement. "But this party needs one more thing..."

"More punch bowls?" asked Pinkie.

"No, it needs... LESS BALLOONS!" I then grabbed every single balloon and brought all of them up to Pinkie's room.

"Uh, what are you doing?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Yeah, what are you doing with all those balloons?" continued Twilight.

"Well you see, I don't like it when balloons pop." I said

:fluttershysad:'I don't like that either'

"Seriously!? What's a party without balloons?" yelled Pinkie.

"A party I can enjoy?" I said. It looked like She was going to explode, but then.

"Okidokeloki! If you're happy, then I have accomplished my mission!"

'I seriously thought she was going to explode!'

:fluttershysad:'As did I...'

"Come on everypony!" said Pinkie. "LET'S PARTY!

Author's Note:

EDIT: I did not know pinkie had only one party cannon so i changed it.

Comments ( 25 )

Neat tricks.

Ahh okay, finally I noticed this story too.

Well I already want to ask if there is a story like this, Human as the main six, but the one that turned Pony is really acting out of character, maybe like an agressive Fluttershy or a shy Rainbow Dash, stuff like this.

I start with this story in a short while, but I already wanted to take my change.

edit: I just noticed the really short chapters, and well I would like it if your suggestions for other storys would be longer.

While it was a bit to short again, I more or less didn´t expected more, but well it was alright I guess.
Sometimes it is a bit weird if everything went´s to perfect, but at least he had some sort of an own personality as far as I can notice.
So not bad for a.... first try maybe?

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While I liked a certain story with a Floyd guy being in Pinkie, I kind of hoped this wouldn´t happen.

I read that story too! but what do you mean you hoped this wouldn't happen?
For one Flutters isn't Pinkie.

Not a bad thing, but I kind of miss the Humans that sort of try to hide what they are for a while.

Not me! I don't want them to think I'm someone i'm not! "Tell the truth and hope for the best!"

half of the time when this happens I always expect them to get a trauma. Sometimes it actually sounds like someone would say they aren´t real.
At least the chapter was a little bit longer this time

You forget! Twilight asks if I was from Canterlot High, and I said no!

7091555 hey, does you or anyone know of stories like this that happened with applejack and/or rarity? I found good similar stories for everypony but them.

7116329 No... I don't.:fluttershysad:

The reason I picked Fluttershy is because she is like me.

I'm not saying I'm shy, but I do find it hard to think of what to say (or type)
And I like animals too. I'm not as responsible, but If I were trapped on an Island
with nothing to eat except one deer. I would rather eat the grass.:unsuresweetie:

7203885 Sorry about that... My friend Swords was screwing around on my account I should have logged off..:twilightblush:

I really like this with FlutterShy:yay:. I hope you can make more chapters. plz:fluttercry: I don't want to rush you. Just do your best, and that will be so great.

7313241 Thanks for the support! :twilightsmile:

Sorry if you're getting impatient I'm just lazy... :fluttershysad:

7314049 it's okay:twilightsmile:. Don't push yourself too hard. It will come out ok.:twilightsheepish: Hope that light bulb for great....... Wait:unsuresweetie: where was I going with this........ :derpytongue2:oh well
So.... hope you have a wonderful night. :twilightsmile:

7419352 I don't know what it's called!
The lake near ponyville.

7497142 This is a self insert, and the beginning takes place a month or so from now (unless its already been September 27th by now) Thank you for the constructive criticism!


7497763 Did you REALLY have to make a reference? :facehoof:

7059887 They have done this with the Pony Earth Universe (where humans awake to find they are sharing their mind with a canon mlp or oc character (or one of the various recurring characters like the cmc or the school children).

They r PERFECT how they already are.just hopes he can leave her body as his human self in the future.either that or him leave as a Pegasus.and future chapters.:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::moustache:

Comment posted by GearHead the Inventor deleted Sep 15th, 2016

I like sotries like this to bad a lot of them are cancelled or might as well be sine they havnt been updated in for ever

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I wish I could tell you something else but I got kind of bored or annoyed with some stories more or less repeating the same habits, the same way characters react or whatever else I might not like about certain characters in the fanfictions here like how Celestia is written half of the time or in romance stories.

What I mean is I would maybe not exactly continue reading this but I could image reading a rewrite.

Not sure what I disliked about it, but it sounds as if this was a chase of two characters sharing a body again right?
I think maybe make Fluttershy a rare character appearing in her dreams once in a while not everytime or have her appear at a later time in the story. I mean I often pray for the human either getting his own pony body or the same, so that both of them exist.....
Maybe you know what I mean, not sure if I describe it good tonight.

edit: I just thought in a possible rewrite I would enjoy her acting differently than from what they used to like being rude or brave too, or maybe make her live somewhere else or going home to Fluttershys parents after finding a clue.

I could image enjoying the fact that the main six try to find their friend for the first chapters of the story.

9473239
I have some plans for either a rewrite on how interaction is or continuing the story or both. I just have other plans and things in the way. However it's on my bucket list. This is only the beginning of the story anyways. Hopefully you may come back to finish when it does get back on it's feet. I apologise for the delays.

Oh wow people still read this? I should update.

Wow so much attention here... Do people want this story to continue? :applejackconfused:

yes do more chapters

10589189
not sure. right now im writing something else that will blow your socks off. maybe.

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