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The last day... The day where Twilight will be judged and executed for her crimes and dangerous sanity level.

But at the very last moment, her mind refocuses... And she realises what she has done wrong...
A little too late.

Sequel to Sanity.

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-intense growling-

EXTERMINATE EQUESTRIA!!! EXTERMINATE! EXXXXTEEEERRRRMIIIINNNAAAATTTTTEEEEE! ALL ARE PUNISHED! EXTERMINATE!!!!!!!

(ok, I'm serious now. Only a few stories can get that reaction out of me, and this one did pretty much that. Congrats on that, my friend! It was an excellent story, although there is one problem. Usually, the executee is usually facing forwards, not up at the blade. Care to explain? But also, this story leads me to think there is something else afterwards.

The last thing I ever saw, was a shimmering silver blade rushing to me...

This leads me to believe that A. She is still alive somehow, or B. she hath turned into a ghost and wrote this. I'm sorry for being so picky, you can delete this if you want. But this story was VERY emotional, it was magnificent. Do keep up the work, my friend!)

Slice of Life

Oh my GOD, that cannot be more literal.

1,007 words

Unforgivable. The punishment is death.

... I've seen some messed up stuff in my day. I'm not just saying that, I really have. My point is I've never read a story that's made me cry, and this one didn't accomplish that either, but this series of one-shots certainly came the closest. Congratulations, you sick person. First, Cupcakes, Rainbow Factory, Little Miss Rarity, Sweet Apple Massacre, and now this..... Remember when this fandom was nicer? Pepperidge Farm remembers.

6767476 Thanks so much! Why would I want to delete your comment...?
I appreciate the criticism!
So, for the ending I didn't quite know how to end it... So I simply settled for that.

And I think I probably didn't make it clear enough that she struggled a lot and twisted her neck to face a tiny bit upwards, so that in the corner of her eyes, she actually saw the blade.

But she was facing down no worries!

6768466 Well, I thought that I was being so picky that you would not have appreciated it.

Too freaking scared to add a comment before someone else is gonna judge me -__-

6767548
Darkness has been, and always will be, appealing to some people. It's just a fact of life. And, like all things, they're completely free to do and enjoy what they want, just as you and I are. Some people don't like happy endings. Who would we be to say that there must be?
I, for one, am a fan of dark stories. As Fall Out Boy once put it, "There's something beautiful and tragic in the fallout." However, there's a certain... light, almost in it. Hm... How to explain...
A fanfiction is a unique genre unlike any other. it's multifaceted, and it has a certain.. effect. When a dark fanfiction of a show filled with such light is made, some of that light gets molded into it, giving it a different feel than if it was just a story about someone killing, it takes our hearts in different directions. We know the characters, and that knowledge, their soul, being turned in such a way, it gives it whole new meaning.
That's why people do this. It's because fanfictions, and fan-made stories, have a certain vibe, for lack of better words, that makes them special, one which is impossible to replicate if it were not based off of the show. Cupcakes, The Rainbow Factory, and all the othersout there, none of these would be what they are if they had nothing to do with My Little Pony. They would be just another horror story, moving on, forgotten about. But they are what they are, and they're extremely popular.
So, I guess it all boils down to this: we're all free to do what we like, and for those that see darkness as beauty rather than negativity, that's just what we like to do. I hate to use the term 'don't like, don't read', because it sounds kind of rude, but if you prefer other, lighter stories, I suppose you can just skip the ones with 'dark' tags.
I hope has been informative. If you have questions, or would like to discuss this further, don't hesitate.
~SoDF

P.S. I'm not trying to attack you, by the way, I'm just trying to help you understand. Let me know if I've offended you at all. Apologies, if I have.
P.P.S. This isn't really that bad, I've read other stories similar to this that have been much, much worse.

6923420 'Twas just a joke. Sorry if I offended you, that was not my intent.

6923420 Could I have the links to what worse stories you've read? I'd love to read one myself!!

6923433
Oh .-. Well, I feel rather silly now.

6923550
Hm, just off the top of my head, ever read Butterflies?

6923601 If it makes you feel any better, I don't think my story can compare to any of your's.

6923696
What'tchu talkin' about? Nopony's story is 'comparable' to another, we're all writers, and every story is worth reading. Tell ya what, I'll take a look at your stuff ^-^
..Wait, you read my stories? ^-^ Sweet!

6923605 No. Can you send me the link please? :pinkiecrazy:

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