Pan Sear, a cook living in Fillydelphia, has a secret: inside he feels as though he is a mare. Follow him through his journey to "her."
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What the?
Well, I can honsetly say that I will not read one word of this simply out of principle. Sorry bro =C just not something I can do. I will however, link you to a we site that will gladly fall in love with your fanfiction =D
https://efchan.net/ef/index.html
highest concentration of LGBT in the whole damn fandom. enjoy =)
"inside he feels as though he should be a mare."
Props to you for being original but...
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Nooooooooooooope.
Well, I can honestly say this isn't your run-of-the-mill fic. This is original, no doubt about it.
Really interesting conept. I like where its going so far; i dont think ive ever seen a transgender fic before, and you're handling this pretty well. Fav'd. keep it up!
Oh my Luna... something original...
I'm interested to see where this goes.
Gonna watch dis... Looks interestin :3
Before I read....
FINALLY! Someone finally writes a story acknowledging TG people!
Post-read: Looks very promising.
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Erm... are you being judgmental? I'm offended, personally.
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Well, while I welcome criticism and nay-sayers to speak their minds, I've got 7 approval thumbs, 7 favourites and five comments of approval; this story isn't going anywhere. Majority rules, and all.
706320 , 706438 , 706743 , 706788 , and 706802 :
Thank the all of you for your words of approval and encouragement, and thank you as well for even reading the damned thing.
706802
Of course not.
I was joking. A story like to me sounds like some very
embarrassing and silly antics are going to be in it. Not my thing.
I'm impressed by what I've read so far and will be continuing to watch with interest.
Tracking for sure, this seems great so far.
Its nice to see a transgender fic up here, its the first one I've ever seen. 
This makes me feel like I should finish my next chapter... I'll do that later.
Anyway, great start to a chapter, you've already introduced the internal crisis, now I wait to see who will die.
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look, im not judging and im sorry it came out like that. I am pirsionaly bisexual and I have a varry good friend that wa TG. so im sorry. In fact i think I will read this. I jumped the giun on because i thought you were making fun of TG people and i was offended
i didnt relise this was serious.
and im sorry or my poor spelling, im in the hospital and doped up right now
707008 and 707323
Thank the both of you; I won't disappoint
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Thank you, My Friend. I have seemed to earn that reputation, haven't I?
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I see, I see. Terribly sorry for the inconvenience, My Friend. While I can take a good joke, I'd never consider slandering Transsexuals in my stories; I'd be a hypocrite if I did. Anyway, why are you at hospital and doped up?
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>why are yu in the hospital
well would you beleave me if I told you I am literaly on my death cot right now? beleave it or not...
but thats beside the point. I should be apologising to you for taking the story out of context. that was fully my fault. I also feel like an ass for making me look like the varry thing I always disliked: a closed minded hater
>shutters
im not =] beleave me
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1. That's not beside any point, My Friend; I think that's a rather pertinent point if I'm honest. I don't mean to pry or bother you with it, but do you "know," or do you "think."
2. Once again, I'm sorry for the lack of clarity. Should I work on that?
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Im sorry.And I know for certan that I curently am. I think I will be still wrighting for another week however. Time is somethin that is hard to dertermin. :/ its jo bother. I just relised how stjpid it would be of me to mention my current situation and expect others to shrug it off
and no need to work on clerity :) thatwas an error soly on my stupidity
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Mate, I'm sorry to offend you if I do, but I shrug it off every time it's mentioned; I've been around death far too much for it to bother me any longer. The most emotion I show regarding it is written words of the characters in my stories; in my mind, it holds no sway. And even if I weren't around it so much, it wouldn't bother me, anyway; every living creature in this universe is 100% likely to die; why does it bother people?
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Friend,I have beenwithin war. I have seen death first hand. How could one be so shallow as to ay that huamns are like other creaters destined to die. Take evry memory, evry happy time, evry sad time, all the people yu knew, how you have touched the lives of those people. Now imagine all of that fading away and being destroyed by a crule god. Thie is death. All of he love and life in ourslfs being stolen from us. I am scareed, but more then that Iam scarwd for the people in the hospital around me ho are at hells waiting room. God knows I had varry little to live for and my departure will amount to varry little, but I have meny expire ces nd love in my heart. we are greater then animals. We can feel love. the most beutyful of emotions. so no, i am not offended. Because thoughI have lived through seeing my friends and family arive in hell, i will never "get used to it"
Quite frankly, i beleave you should be ashamed of yourself for not seeing the value in human life. I hope you will someday.
Yes, yes. So. Much. Yes.
We need these types of fics more often. Brilliant. Just brilliant.
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I never said that; I said I know it all will end eventually. Believe whatever you'd like to believe, Comrade, be it in an ancient piece of literature or whatever else the so-called "Master Race" has developed to explain the unexplainable, but don't shove it down anyone else's throat.
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human life and love is a beutyful thing. Weare all beutyful. you too. and im sorry, but think evryone and there life deserve to be valued and accepted for who theyare. we will all die, but thay dosnt mean it is a good thing. thats just how I feel. sorry if you think otherwise but I will continue to stand by my principles.
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And I will continue to stand by mine, Comrade. I honour your staunchness in your beliefs; you don't find that every day. I would physically shake your hand if I could.
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im sorry if you feel im "shoving my philosophy down your throught" but dont you think love and tolerence encompases valuing people for who theyare therwfor valuing there lives?
im sorry. Just something I felt I had to say. I apreciat the gestureand though the joke may seem a little morbid and twisted: I will stand by my prnciples to the grave. =)
I need to get some rest now, it is little past elevon in the mrning now.
all I can do is thankyou for hopfuly taking my words to thought insted of tossing them aside like meny do. =]<3
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If anything I tell you is remembered by you, let it be this:
I value life, all life, but I know it all ends. That doesn't in any way mean that I think that life is meaningless; it means I know it ends. And, I've always taken all of my friends' words to thought, and have never forgotten what they said; you're no exception.
And, if this is the last time I get to say anything you you, I want my last words to you be this: I love you.
708561
thankyou.
that truely means alot <3
708172
Yes, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing, is it?
ok im gonna bite. this story is shaping up to be very interesting.
Yes, I can understand Pan's resistance to outside help. I would think it very common in such a situation; but I do hope he can summon the will to see past it.
Ouch.
The "Red Hot Filly Peppers" thing jolted me out of the story. Please get rid of it. You'd be much better off making up a random pony band name.
Also, a spell check would help.
715233
As far as spelling errors, where did I err? I've spellchecked it twice, and saw nothing wrong. Also, as per my policy, should three people bring up the same point, I shall change it.
“Oh, yeah,” said the mulberry mare in realisation. <-- Realization
The mare opened her mouth, but before she could reply, Pan closed his eyes and turned face, praparing to walk away <-- Preparing
“Shred,My Friend, you sure do know how to cook. I’m glad I learned from you.” His tone then became heavy as he continued, “rest in peace, Old Friend.”
Spacing errors. you didnt put a space after the first comma
...and put them away in an impeccably organized fashion. <-- organized
His bedroom was a bit smaller than his living room, and was just as modestly dacorated: <-- Decorated
The words danced mockingly as he thought.
“Let me help you.”
“You don’t have to do that.”
“I want to help you.”
“I don’t wnat your help.”
Want, not wnat.
There you go...
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And, there you are. Thank you for pointing those out, Friend. And, as for the "realisation" and "organised," that's an alternate spelling of the words; British English, to be exact. The same thing with "centre," "metre," "idolise," among other words.
Yeah, Firefox doesn't know British English, so I couldn't be sure.
Pan is turning out to be an interesting character, I can't wait to see how you develop him further.
716227
Ah, I see. Terribly sorry for the lack of clarity, Mate.
718344
Thank you, Sir. I'm interested in seeing what I come up with, as well, if I'm honest.
This chapter was great development wise, looking forward to the next one.
I tried reading this when it first came out, and wasn't really interested. But now I think it sounds pretty interesting. I'll give it another try tomorrow, right now it's 1 am, and I'm too tired.
Oh my god, that title made me laugh so hard, kudos to you for that.
Also, his mood swings make me think that he is either bipolar, or he has serious emotional issues, of which I would pick the latter.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
awesome story, why is her life in a pan though
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What changed your mind, Mate? That is, if you don't mind my asking.
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Interesting. Thank you, nonetheless, My Friend.
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Because she's a cook, and her name is Pan.
Guess who is back and loves your story
Oh, I am glad. Poor Pan needed one friend who would get up in his face about the defensiveness of his actions, to let him see what he was doing to his friends. I'm glad he's accepted that he needs them and can now rely on their support.
The first step is always the hardest one, at least you acknowledge that instead of everything immediately being all hunky dory after the first try.
I hope all goes well with her parents! I'm not really sure what it's like to come out as trans to parents, but I have come out to mine as gay, and it is one of the hardest steps. :c I really hope her parents accept her!
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Have you read my stories? "Hunky-Dory" rarely if ever happens, Mate.
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Well, you'll find out next Friday, Mate.
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I realize that, I just recently read a story that had potential, the character had internal conflict, but when confronted about it suddenly the problem was just gone.
794023 Next Friday? Awesomeee.
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Ruined potential, Mate. I've seen that in stories before.
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Yes. I post new chapters every Friday. I like for things like this to be organised.
794730 Ah, I've never noticed! That's great to know