The Truth Behind Surprise

Surprise is an average mare, at least to those who don't know the truth. Do not read this story if you are opposed to violence, gore, and death.

Chapters (3)

Prologue: "And What a Surprise This Is" · 6th Nov 2012 · 1,494 words
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Chapter 1 · 12th Nov 2012 · 2,151 words
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Chapter 2 · 30th Dec 2012 · 1,587 words
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Eakin

Eakin #1 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · · Prologue: "And What a Surprise This Is" ·

If you're promising violence, gore and death shouldn't you also flag this with the Gore tag?

wolfeprocter

wolfeprocter #2 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · · Prologue: "And What a Surprise This Is" ·

Given the descrip, I think I see where this is going...

SergeantShenanigans

SergeantShenanigans #3 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · · Prologue: "And What a Surprise This Is" ·

This doesn't sound like it'll end well.

Then again most doppelgangers never end up in a happy story that has a description of violence, gore, and death.

ThatGirl2147

ThatGirl2147 #4 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · · Prologue: "And What a Surprise This Is" ·

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I did, didn't I? If not, then how do I do that?
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Possibly.
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Possibly. I figured I should warn people right now, because if they start reading some scenes of later chapters, they'll complain that I didn't warn them. So, I give that small spoiler; I will not, however, spoil the doer(s) of the violent actions.

SergeantShenanigans