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Life Is Unfair

It was 8am, Spike woke up and went to the kitchen to make breakfast. As he was making pancakes, Twilight aroused from her slumber.
"Oh, Good morning Twilight. I made your favorite." Spike gave Twilight the plate of 5 pancakes, they were Twilight's favorite. "Thank you Spike." Twilight said in a charming manner. "So, have you chosen who you are going to take on a date with?" Twilight questioned Spike. "Oh, uuh I don't know to be honest. I like them both... I can't decide." Spike was shaken at this point.

As Twilight was finishing up her meal, she stared at Spike with daring eyes. "Spike please don't tell me you aren't trying to get in a threeway." Spike was staring at Twilight with "why would you think that" eyes. "NO I AM NOT, AND HOW CAN YOU THINK THAT?!" Spike shouted out of the blue. "DO YOU EVEN KNOW ME, I AM NOT A DIRTY LITTLE CUNT."

"Spike, please calm down, I didn't mean to say it like that."

Spike was pissed at this point, there was no way to calm him down.

"NO, YOU KNOW WHAT TWILIGHT, I DON'T THINK YOU EVEN KNOW WHO I AM! You treated me like a slave all these years, AND I'M TIRED OF IT! I'M DONE, I'M DONE WITH YOU, I'M DONE WITH LOVE, AND I'M DONE WITH LIFE!" Spike stood up and headed to the door, he still had the diamond necklace Rarity gave to him and he was planning to sell it.

"Spike please don't go!!!" Twilight was begging him to stay at this point.

"WHY SHOULDN'T I LEAVE?! NO ONE CARES ABOUT ME, I AM JUST FREE LABOR." Spike couldn't stop his tears as he shouted at his mother.

"SPIKE WE ALL CARE ABOUT YOU, JUST THINK HOW RARITY AND APPLEJACK WILL DO WITHOUT YOU. PLEASE COME BACK SPIKE, PLEEEEAASSEE, I LOVE YOU!"
"Good bye." Spike walked out the door, with necklace in hand.

Twilight was sobbing, she never cried as much as she was right now. Losing her number one assistant, losing... her son.

"Why did I have to open my big mouth?" She asked herself. "Please come back, COME BACCKKKK!!!"

As Spike was walking away he could see Twilight sobbing at the front door through his peripheral vision. He ignored her and kept on walking, looking down at the necklace. He didn't know what to do with it. An hour later, he sold it for 100 bits.

"mhm, that's a lot of money... for something so useless" Spike said to himself. Spike was acting different, he wasn't the Spike everyone knew and loved. "No more old Spike, no more Spikey-Wikey, That spike is dead." Spike committed to himself that he was not the wimp he was before. He was only 18 but had his mind set already. He went to the local E-Mart to buy some Marewiser. The legal drinking age in Equestria was 18 years of age.

With the money he got and the money he already had, he bought a small hotel in Canterlot. He lived in the dark and dangerous side of the city.

"Stupid Twilight, No one cares about me, what is the point of living?" Meanwhile Applejack wanted to take Spike somewhere nice for a date. But as she arrived at the house she saw Twilight crying on the front lawn.

"Twilight! what happened are ya ok?" Applejack said in a concurred voice.

"No!!" Twilight cried out as she was sobbing in Applejack's hooves.

"What's the matter with ya, Sugarcube?!"

"SPIKE LEFT!!!"

At this point Applejack was frozen, she felt dead for an eternity it seemed.

Applejack dropped Twilight and started sprinting out the door. She didn't know where she was heading, she didn't care where she ended up. All she wanted to do is see her little Spikey-bear. But wouldn't she know, that her seen to be boyfriend was going to do something so extreme, that it might scar her for life.

Author's Note:

Wow what a dramatic chapter, while writing this chapter I realized how much I love writing it This chapter was dark, and trust me it gets darker up ahead. btw I changed Applejack's little nickname for Spike to "Spikey-Bear" instead of "Spikey-Pooh" it just felt better.

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Delete_Account

Delete_Account #1 · Jun 16th, 2016 · · ·

Ayyye awesome fan fic boi XD

Nighty_Nighty

Nighty_Nighty #2 · Jun 16th, 2016 · · ·

10/10 best story I have ever read.

NightDragon97

NightDragon97 #3 · Jun 18th, 2016 · · ·

This I have to say is probably one of the worst stories I have ever read on this site. There is no real plot, the grammar is abysmal, and it's just an overall bad story. The idea of the story was fine but the presentation was not.

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