FireFlash has flashbacks to when he and Rainbow Dash first met. This is the sequel to The Lost Wonderbolts, revealing FireFlash and Dash's past together.
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Rainbow Dash is cute as a filly
700607 i know
700620 That does it I want an RD plushie! Or...a plushie modled after Clay! That would be awsome!
It'd be a good idea if you tried to flesh out your writing more with some imagery, as well as slow it down a lot. This is going way, way too fast for any reader to really be able to get sucked into. I know that it's a sequel, but even if you warn us, at least give some insight into what's going on.
700633 fair enough. will add another pre-chapter
Edit: eventually, if i ever feel like it.
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700746 glad u like! always happy to please my readers
this is a PREQUEL, not a sequel
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701052 not true. the FLASHBACKS are from before, but this story is a SEQUEL, as later chapters will reveal. This will flip back and forth between present (sequel) and past (flashbacks)
707169 its gets better...or worse
707186 okayyy u gusta i get it
701101 doesn't that make it a presequel?
THE WORLD! IT'S BEEN TURNED UPSIDE DOWN!
734224 lawlz. the events in the story are before the first story, but you have to read the first one to get it, so yeah, i guess it is a presequel...whatever that is
782277 lolz
Whoa whoa whoa...whoa. Chicken soup? Fireflash their ponies they dont eat meat. Thats messed up.
awesome chapter cant wait for more
817227 k fixed
Edit: thanks for noticing, I'm not sure how I made such a STUPID mistake
782237 all right, fixed.
817601 sorry, there won't be more for a while I'm busy with two other fics. A non-oneshot duct tape crossover, and a BiE fic featuring me and some of my friends.
I'm REALY sorry, Fireflash. The pacing in this is just AWFULL!!! I mean, you didn't even finish seting the scean and you had Rainbow makign out with oyur OC (I think you might be a bit lonly in real life, am I right?)
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Ooh! Put me in it! We're friends, right?
d,aaaaaaaaawwwwwww
915214 thanks. glad you liked it.
Me liked. MOAR!
935631 sorry, but MAWRD is on hiatus. I'm working on my MiE fic and a short chaptered one-shot idea, Derpy+duct tape.
Then how did rainbow survive?
Aaa wow, that was such a heart warming sequel and you've still got room to keep going, love it
3031005 I've all but cancelled this one, sadly. I'm just not really writing anymore. I may start up when school starts again.
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Aw man, that sucks because you've got some massive talent here
hopefully I'll be on one day and I'll see some story pop up made by you 
3039121 You probably will. I'm most likely to revive MLPDTIM if anything.
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I just hope you get around to reviving this some day as well
3043394 We'll see.
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