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When Applejack and the rest of the Mane Six find an old game board in one of Twilight's Castle's rooms, they decide to play it. But when strange things start to occur, they have the potential of even affecting all of Ponyville! If they don't defeat the mysterious game in time, who knows what'll happen?
Join the Mane Six as they try to overcome challenges, and overall just do their best to fix the mess they've gotten themselves into.
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I like the set off so far, but when you do dialogues, try to indent and begin with a new line. That way it's easier for readers to follow the plot.
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Thanks so much! And thank you as well for the feedback, we'll test that out :3
And by the way, I love your stories, the subjects are very creative^^
- Sunshine
6678449 Aww ty again! I feel proud being your first followed member!
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Awwww no problem :3
Can't wait to read more. Good description and plot set up.
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Awww thanks so much! We spent a while trying to get it right, so we're glad it turned out well!
Sincerely,
Sunshine & Velvet
This sounds like Ouija
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Heh, I see where you're coming from! But it's not dark or scary, more of a fun adventure story they have to go through, based off of the movie Jumanji.
I like the story you have started a total jumanji like thing. Keep it up :3