• Published 19th Nov 2015
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Free Falling - Scquishiey



Rainbow Dash goes out for an afternoon flight. Things don't go very swimmingly–or do they?

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Chapter 5. Two Sad Sparks Blinking in the Sun

Rainbow Dash lead Soarin to the front door of her cloud mansion. They both said their goodbyes as Soarin took off into the orange and yellow hued skies above as Rainbow Dash silently watched him head straight towards the sunset until he disappeared into the horizon.

Rainbow Dash closed her eyes and let out a peaceful sigh and a small smile made its way across her face.

She then turned around, now facing her cloud mansion and walked towards her front door, opened it, walked inside, and gently closed it behind herself, excited for what next week would bring.

Perhaps Rainbow Dash did love something a little more than flying. Maybe even a little bit more. Maybe, just maybe.

The End.

Comments ( 37 )

Maybe you should add this chapter with the previous one?

It was a great story! Good grammar and all that good stuff.

6648755 Thank you! :twilightsmile:That really means a lot to me lol

This. Is. AWESOME!!!

6650660 Thank you so much! :twilightsmile:

woah Mind blown way better than my first one, you should read it if you want it's called Soarindash Chronicles

I applaud you
Job well done

6651222 Thank you! :) And I will be sure to take a look at your story as well.

It's a pretty sweet story ^v^ loved it!

6651331 Ahhh oh my gosh it's you, I love your Soarindash stories! :rainbowkiss: Thank you, it means a lot coming from you! :^)

6651247 u should really write another one

6653857 I am! :) Working on a sequel right now

6654066
Can't wait for the sequel, have fun writing :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy:

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WELL DONE! TRULY WELL DONE! I hope you submit the sequel very soon. I can't wait for it. And really, write more stuff. You have a great talent:pinkiehappy:

6654747 Awh thank you so much! This is seriously my first time attempting to write anything so I'm glad you like it lol

6654340 Thanks! I'm actually going to do two more sequels :twilightsmile:

6654066 YESSSSSSSSSSSSS
JOY CAN NOT BE EXPLAINED

6655024
Woooooo!!! 2 sequels!? HYPED!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

Read the other comments glad to know there will a couple of sequels!
6647791
Dammit! You beat me to the punch.

6670133 Lololol thanks for reading I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yes I've been working on the sequel ever since I posted this one and should be out shortly. :twilightsmile:

6670133
Well, what can I say? I spend WAY too much time here.

IT"S SO GOOODDDDDDDD!!!!!!! :D LOVE IT!

Very nice story :rainbowkiss:

I like it,I bet long distant relationships are hard to keep!

OMG :raritycry: This was the most beautiful story I have ever read. It is so detailed, I felt I was watching a show in my head. I can't wait to read the newest story that you have created.

6814615 Lmao thanks gurl :eeyup:

I LOOOOOOOOOVVVVEEEE this! Its a cute little story and its very.... how should I put it?? Hmmmmmmmm.... Soarindash. Could I use "Ever since that one night day where Rainbow was struck by lightning, she and Soarin could never be separated"?
I would give you full credit. :3

:rainbowkiss:

7286624 Thank you! Lmao and yes :twilightsmile:

THX Scquishiey :3 :scootangel:

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