A little filly named Scootaloo is left to ponder over her lifelong dream of one day being able to soar high above the clouds, becoming lost in her own imaginings.
A little filly named Scootaloo is left to ponder over her lifelong dream of one day being able to soar high above the clouds, becoming lost in her own imaginings.
You get an A for effort and ambition here. Poetry is hard, and adhering to any kind of rhythm scheme is hard too. There are a few places where your execution falters and the idea isn't the most original, but you should still be proud of this.
6861705 Thank you, this was just something I wanted to try and I'm not a very experienced writer so I understand
6861860 I'm with ya there brother
Holy.
+1
6862561 Lol thank you
6862165 Lol I'm not a guy But thanks for reading
Wow, very beautifully written. Great job with the rhymes. You were able to tell it in a story-like way yet it keeps the structure of a poem.
6866348 Thank you!