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Scquishiey


I like the rainbow one.

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A little filly named Scootaloo is left to ponder over her lifelong dream of one day being able to soar high above the clouds, becoming lost in her own imaginings.

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You get an A for effort and ambition here. Poetry is hard, and adhering to any kind of rhythm scheme is hard too. There are a few places where your execution falters and the idea isn't the most original, but you should still be proud of this.

6861705 Thank you, this was just something I wanted to try and I'm not a very experienced writer so I understand

Holy.

+1

6862165 Lol I'm not a guy :twilightsheepish: But thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

Wow, very beautifully written. Great job with the rhymes. You were able to tell it in a story-like way yet it keeps the structure of a poem.

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