Being a Wonderbolt is an amazing experience for Rainbow Dash. And, just like any job, it has its downsides: having to hold attention for what seems like forever, straining muscles one too many times, and not being home very often are just a few of the inconveniences being a Wonderbolt brings. However, Dash has gotten used to all of this by now.
Though, when you have a crush on your loud, overbearing captain, it can make everything so much harder.
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That line made my week! Great story, Random!
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Ha, I'm glad! Thank you
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"Feels like I'm wearing nothing at all, nothing at all, nothing at all."
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The best way of enjoying a morning cup, is seeing a new Spitefire fic up.
Sorry, that's not my cup of tea.
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Yay
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And it's alright. You don't have to read every story of mine. If it's not your cup of tea, just ignore it. I won't be hurt
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Thanks. Perhaps I should consider saying that about any story that I don't usually like, since it's a rather mature response.
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I don't think you have to say it. After all, comment sections are for feedback for the story itself.
Edit: Well, if you say that that's the reason you downvoted something, then sure. Reasons are always good.
Have to say I'm not sure about the description of Spitfire giggling, it seems too childlike for her, especially when on-duty. I laughed a lot at this line though:
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Hm, good point. I'll fix that.
I laughed a bit too much when I wrote that
8334016 Well now we know why Soarin's been having such a terrible time with mares - he's not bisexual, he's piesexual.
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OH MY GOSH
I love this story, it put a good smile on my face.
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I'm glad you liked it
Cute!
I loved the camaraderie between Rainbow Dash and Soarin, they seem like they'd be cool like that. At one point I thought you were going to have Soarin confess to also having a crush on Rainbow Dash and was dreading that... but what you had was WAY better! (I can totally see Soarin as being bi, or at least considering it).
Another little touch I like is how Dash immediately went to hug Spitfire instead of a kiss- I can definitely relate to that, haha
So yeah, cute stuff