This story is a sequel to Dreams & Nightmares
Taking place a year and a half after Maud Pie was attacked by Pinkie Pie, Marble Pie finds out the true real reason why her family was attacked. She runs away from the Pie Rock Farm, afraid to stay in the same house with them. There's only one pony who she can turn to now.
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First off, I'd like to thank anyone who is reading this who read the first three stories almost a year ago and are still along with me today. It makes me happy to see that people enjoy my writing that much. Kinda makes me feel like a halfway decent writer.
Although I've been working on this story for many months now, please point out any errors you may see. Other than that, I'd recommend to anyone new to read the previous stories in this series and then come back to avoid any confusion, and I hope you enjoy it.
ok they must got to Celestia for protection!!
More?
7880497 Working on a new chapter rn.
And the story of Pinkamena continues. I love the direction this is going so far. I especially love the route you decided to take in developing Pinkamena's character. You have no idea how refreshing it is to see someone make her more than a senseless killing machine. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks
When will this be updated?
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I should have a chapter out by the holidays.
"I'm sorry Pinkie. I wish I could tell her that she needs more time, but it's an offer she can't refuse."
Um, that implies Marble actually having a choice and finding it too tempting to refuse.
"I'm sorry Pinkie. I wish I could tell her that she needs more time, but it's an offer she can't refuse."
Um, that implies Marble actually having a choice and finding it too tempting to refuse.
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Hello, I do plan on finishing this. I could give you a whole list of reasons why I haven't yet, but I won't. There's one or two chapters left before I consider it a done deal. And thank you for commenting on my other stories, I appreciate it
I eagerly await the next chapter
. Maybe I'll have something to review soon.
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Yes, it is.
Not so mean now, huh?
I don't think so! There's a chapter left and this story is incomplete (on hiatus)!
I've enjoyed the stories so far. I hope you will be able to finish it. I understand writer's block, creative burnout and whatnot. If you ever decide to write anymore on this, just write a couple of paragraphs when the inspiration hits, take plenty of breaks, even if is just for a few minutes to let the creative juices even out and your synapses to reset.
So since it's been 3 years since I read this I need a quick catch up on this story
Woo! UPDATE! I just discovered this a month ago. I knew tracking this was a good idea!
Somebody get the Pie parents arrested already!!
I want more of this so badly aaaaaaa
Magnificent
More please
We need more!!