The Cutie Mark Ending: Alterante Ending

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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders reject Twilight's attempt to make them love Smarty Pants, Twilight takes them to her laboratory for an experiment.

Original Story by Life-Is-A-Party and posted on Equestria Forums. Alternate Ending with permission.

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Sneaks

Sneaks #1 · Jun 1st, 2012 · · ·

Nice alternate story to this.

So if it all was an illusion then wouldn't the cutie mark have been an illusion as well?Or did the effects of the test cause a real cutie mark?Because I have to say the "getting the cutie mark" thing was pretty nice(and helped with storyline) but a bit cliche."I will sacrifice myself" and then something good happens resulting in it countering the effect -.- a little too cliche but it is still pretty good nonetheless.

Also since you are probably still reading this...First comment!woohoo!

KeyboardLuna

KeyboardLuna #2 · Jun 1st, 2012 · · ·

At the beginning: Fillies & Gentlecolts, the new Cupcakes!
At the end: Aww.. That's such a sweet story, but you still can't trust kids with money. They'd purposely buy sharp objects, it's wired into their brains..