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SaintChoc


I write to my fancy!

Comments ( 9 )

The Rubix Cube... Only Twilight... :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

You did a pretty good job, describing six ponies engaged in friendship-wrestling without it getting confusing. :pinkiehappy:

more please well done :pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::ajsmug::raritywink::twilightsmile:

That intro... Only Pinkie... :facehoof::pinkiehappy:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So cute!
:yay::rainbowkiss:

For such a porn-without-plot setup, this manages to be very sweet and tender and loving, even finding the time to inject a little romance and humour in too. The characters feel like friends, comfortable around each other no matter what the circumstances, and that's all too rare even in stories where nothing more intimate than a hug is exchanged. Really good job.

Good orgy fics are hard to come by, and this must be the best one out there. The side story of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash was very sweet, seeing them do their own thing. As far as negative criticism goes, I have nothing much to give. The characters seem well played out and fitting to their respective personalities and the situation. The story itself was well written and easy to read. Just keep doing what you are doing. As far as your first fic goes, this is pretty spot on.

Will there be any futa spells cast in the next one

I need to see one of these where celestia walks in, possibly joining in.

That was incredible! I'm so impressed that you were able to write six characters in a scene simultaneously, making sure everypony had something to do AND keeping everyone in character so well! And I loved everypony's little turn-ons, especially Rarity and Fluttershy. Very excited to read the rest of this series.

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