(MLP x Fallout x Mad Max)
It's never easy living out here.
One day your out scavenging, shifting through the dirt and digging in the ground for parts and remnants of the past, trying to make a living. The next, you're dragged into an unknown battle where everything you hold close is on the line.
We use machines, of old and new, to help in our lives and our battles. The road we all travel is long with twists and turns. Some of us stop along the way while others keep going until they finally stop. My beginning was less than easy and to keep going probably won't be easy.
Where will this road take me? ...I'll let you know when I get there.
(This is my first Fallout Equestria fic.)
(I own nothing save for the characters. The world was created by the talented Kkat.)
Well now it has to go wrong, that's just the logic of the wasteland.
And good story, keep up the good work.
Next update? Soon please. It's good.
Interesting concept. This is the first time I've seen someone try to merge the FoE and Mad Max universes into a coherent fanfic. I look forward to reading more of it.
I do have some small, nitpicky things to point out. I swear this is just to help though. Someone did the same thing for me in my new fic.
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I don't know what was trying to be said here.
These show up near each other. They shouldn't be questions, they should end in a period.
What's the other language? If the story is from Aero's point of view, the reader should know the name of the language just like Aero does.
Undo should be undid. You slipped into present tense here.
"Got it!" should be in quotation marks. 'Got It!' implies thought, not speech.
These should probably be turned into one paragraph. As I read this part I mistook the work he had done already as what Aero was doing at this point of the story. Making it into one paragraph makes it easier to understand that this work has already been done.
Also, if the Sky Runner was a converted bombing chariot, wouldn't it already have some form of steering mechanism?
This is a really good story and I hope for it to continue
But there was minor grammatical errors and misspellings, but otherwise a good and engaging story, I also see you took inspiration from Mad Max the game
Does this mean there will be a characters based off of Immortan Joe?
7850749 Wait, I thought Mad Max was a movie.
7850955 There is also a game, you should easily be able to find it on youtube