Equestria's Got Talent

by BudCharles

The Great And Conclusive Epilogue

Twilight Sparkle happily closed the last page of her book. "Finally, a whole day of just reading, not a single pony looking for-"

Knock, knock, knock!

Twilight sighed. "Princess Twilight Sparkle, how can I help -"

"Trixie is so lonely!" Twilight's student cried out as dramatically as possible, flinging the door open.

"You've never been lonely before", Twilight replied, raising an eyebrow.

"But Trixie never had a friend before - you know - except you. You're alright, Trixie guesses. But still! Her only other friend has been gone for a whole week!"

"Why don't you just go outside and make another friend?"

"Because making friends is boring! The Great and Powerful Trixie does not like to be bored!"

"Well, the 'Great and Attention-Seeking Trixie' could always do extra research?"

"On second thoughts Trixie loves making friends! Where should the Friendly and Outgoing Trixie look first?"

Twilight smiled and went onto her next book. "Try Sugarcube Corner, I guarantee you'll make at least one friend there!"

Author's Note:

What? You can't expect me to have something intelligent to say every time xD

I'm not sure if there's a rule against publishing more than one chapter in a day, I saw nothing in the FAQ, so I think it's okay. If not, sowee!

Comments

[BudCharles]

6483735 Thanks so much for the feedback and the follow :3 I do like the idea of Trixie muttering "dork" quietly as she leaves Twilight's room, it does seem Trixie-ish

And thanks for the advice on connecting scenes too - I definitely needed that. Just slowing down the pace doesn't seem to work in my brain, so finding a way to connect scenes a bit less jarringly would be useful.

I'm thinking my next story will be something other than the usual Trixie or Scootaloo stories, but after that I could (and should... and will) definitely come back to Trixie and Gold Star again, they definitely still have some way to go as characters. I am a bit worried though that having a sequel to a sequel could drive some people away XD I'm nearly making my own season xD

I think I will do it though, like you said I didn't really give enough development to Gold Star here - and I have a few ideas in mind for Trixie too, I just have to decide which one to go with XD