16 year old Aussie nerd. Fan of MLP, Pokemon, HTTYD and a heap of other things. Mainly write Trixie stories and Scootaloo stories, because those characters are adorable >w<
This story is a sequel to Out Of Place
(Don't need to read the prequel to understand it, it's really just backstory)
Trixie has become Twilight's student and a famous performer, Spike has become king of dragons, but remains Twilight's loyal and lifelong friend. The two of them end up having a picnic together, and find that their deepest secrets are actually pretty similar.
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6731634 Oh wow sorry before I comment on the main point CHRISTMAS TRIXIE IS AWESOME XD Best icon ever!
Anyway yeah, thanks as always for the feedback. I do try and take it on board, it just takes me a long time to get things right XD I did start writing just another all-over-the-place fic, but then I stopped myself and went "hey, hang on, what are you doing? Don't squish this conversation into one paragraph, it would make a good story in itself". And I think that's because of feedback from you and others, it actually made me stop and think XD
I'll try and include more descriptions in the next story too, I might do the Scootaloo one next because that could also be a slower, more character- and environment-focused one. Actually, I could even remake my first story, although I'm not sure if I'm allowed to remake things on this site? The rules seem a bit ambiguous and I don't want to get banned xD I have wanted to re-do it for a while though, so if I am allowed to then I'll probably go ahead and do that, with all the things I've learned since I joined :3
Anyway yeah, I know grammar is important, but I kind of want to wait until I get the storytelling to reach a decent level of quality before I focus on grammar if that makes sense? Still mention it because I'll go look back at old comments eventually, but right now I'm trying to make my stories more like, well, stories, and less like "fever-induced dreams" as a commenter once put it XD
As always, thanks for reading and commenting, you've been a really big help to me, and keep writing your stories too, because people need to know that Trixie is awesome and you're good at portraying her awesomeness! (Really hoping for Trixie in season 6 X3)
6734273 Thanks :3 I'm looking forward to it :3