16 year old Aussie nerd. Fan of MLP, Pokemon, HTTYD and a heap of other things. Mainly write Trixie stories and Scootaloo stories, because those characters are adorable >w<
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Twilight Sparkle is practicing her flying when she crash-lands in front of The Great and Powerful Trixie. Trixie tells Twilight she wants to become her royal student, to be "even more magnificent", and Twilight accepts, since she could learn from having a student. But things end up taking a turn for the worse - being a teacher is a lot harder than Twilight expected, and being a student is a lot harder than Trixie expected.
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'Do with a royal student'?
6307772 It's a phrase meaning something would be helpful, so "I could do with a royal student" means "it'd be helpful to have a royal student" or "I'd like to have a royal student".
Sorry, can't really get into it, pacing is like a fever dream, jumping all over the place.
You can't see me!!!
All hail King Spike!!!
6476766 ?
Description give me soo much hype. But all this hype disappear after reading this chapter. Sometimes ur characters are soooooooo flat and unreal.
who tried to enslave them all start to show up AGAIN. 
For example Why the heck fluttershy don't even care about Trixie showing in ponyvile. Fluttershy is most shy and frightened character in the show so isnt her suppose to run, hide or at least shout? That's not everything, why regular background ponies in ponyvile don't even worries about trixie? Some random tyrant
Maybe in next chapters story will get some more realism and became more...complex. YES I KNOW my English lvl is lower than Mariana Trench but i guess u can see my point here....right?
"Trixie... apologies for
apologizes for
Hmm. Well, let's see.
The last bit there is a bit rushed. Still, interesting.
6530053 I'm Aussie XD We spell stuff with an s XD
6530143 Thanks though x3
6527116 Sorry, I really suck :P I'm trying to get better because I have great ideas but I'm not good at drawing, or coding, or animating, or singing, or writing XD So I just decided I'll focus on writing and try and get good enough to make my ideas a reality. But I'm not there yet.
6533376 Well i hope u get better and become best writer from ur country. Just next time give some more life to your characters. ^^
6533591 Thankyou x3
I know that there is such a thing as forcing interesting things to happen, but this chance meeting is too much to swallow when combined with the lackluster execution. There is such a thing as being straight to the point, but this is too straight. The meeting is rushed. There is too little interaction. Too little of everything. Try tripling the word count of the meeting.