• Published 12th Sep 2015
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The Rise of Sombra - Rakoon1



What happen when Sombra survives to his defeat in the Crystal Empire and tries to conquer all Equestria seducing the powerful Princess of Friendship? Will everything bow to his darkness?

Comments ( 12 )

I sense a sequel in the works.

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Perhaps... One never knows.

Wow that was the best way to leave the story open for a sequel. That was the best cliffhanger ever. I loved this story. I look forward to how you followit up in the sequel. Will Twilight fall into darkness because of her love of Sombra? Will Sombra be truly reformed? And how will Celeestia, Luna, and the mane 6 save her before either Sombra finds a way to rule Equestria or before Twilight succombs to darkness because of her love of Sombra? I really want to know

Sequel please

The story is not bad and I'm glad you finished it.My only problem here...is the grammar.There are many mistakes that make the story feel rushed...

This was pretty good I would love a sequel.

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I have some ideas for that, but I still need to work on it. However, this is not my priority right now. I'll do my best to keep this saga, don't worry.

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Ok dokie I understand. I just really liked it I think I'll check out some more of your stuff :)

Seriously? You leave it like that? without sequel?

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This is not my priority. I'm more focused on my main saga. But I do have some plans for a sequel.

10494053
Thank you, is only that you left it in a cliffhanger

10494081
That was the point:raritywink:

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