What happen when Sombra survives to his defeat in the Crystal Empire and tries to conquer all Equestria seducing the powerful Princess of Friendship? Will everything bow to his darkness?
Damn it Twilight! For once listen to your head here, this is King Sombra we are talking about, the stallion that was prepared for anything when you went to stop him? That is more than enough proof to NOT trust this guy to reform!
*le sigh* Oh joy! Sombra's become an even more stereotypical edgelord villain, monologuing about his 'diabolical plan' in a place where the walls could, quite literally mind you this is a world where magic exists, have ears. I know the story is dead and all, but i need to point this out. Comic book villain stereotypes are so overdone, why not have something new? Like maybe, i don't know, a competent villain? (*Comical gasp* My word! He speaks heresy!) You know, one who's actually not blinded by an ego the size of a planet, one who plans ahead, one who actually doesn't monologue, or rant at the hero for five minutes and expose the flaw in their plans, and thus giving the protagonist a way to defeat them whilst they're distracted.
9854719 The story may be a little dead, but I will revive it. But I'm too much focused in my main series. Besides, I'm preparing a finale for this story, but it's costing me to do it. However, I'm confident I can do it.
... kinda rushed--- but I like it!
let it come!!!
Can't wait till the next chapter.
We desire more chapters, the quality could use a touch of work though, but 'twas enjoyed nonetheless
I like please continue
I love a good Twilbra any day, but consider rewrite the story description, you basically give away half of the plot by now.
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Believe me, I may have some ways of surprise you.
... Oh dear
Damn it Twilight! For once listen to your head here, this is King Sombra we are talking about, the stallion that was prepared for anything when you went to stop him? That is more than enough proof to NOT trust this guy to reform!
*le sigh* Oh joy! Sombra's become an even more stereotypical edgelord villain, monologuing about his 'diabolical plan' in a place where the walls could, quite literally mind you this is a world where magic exists, have ears. I know the story is dead and all, but i need to point this out. Comic book villain stereotypes are so overdone, why not have something new? Like maybe, i don't know, a competent villain? (*Comical gasp* My word! He speaks heresy!) You know, one who's actually not blinded by an ego the size of a planet, one who plans ahead, one who actually doesn't monologue, or rant at the hero for five minutes and expose the flaw in their plans, and thus giving the protagonist a way to defeat them whilst they're distracted.
9854719
The story may be a little dead, but I will revive it. But I'm too much focused in my main series. Besides, I'm preparing a finale for this story, but it's costing me to do it. However, I'm confident I can do it.