• Member Since 28th Aug, 2015
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I_Heart_Derpy


I was born at a very young age, love pokemon, fnaf, and making my bros laugh, am awesome in every way, and am easily distracte

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Derpy is a loving sister, a sweet marefriend, and over all a nice pony. She loves the Doctor, and all of his inventions. One morning, she 'accidentally' activates a spying device, and temptation casts its spell on her...

Join Derpy as she sees the princesses, the mane six, and all of Ponyville when they think they're alone... :pinkiehappy: Mwahaha...

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Comments ( 13 )

I love it, and you will too.

The Anon in Equestria group is for stories about a character named Anon/Anonymous, who lives in Equestria. The title is also the rules. As such, this story doesn't qualify.
If you do any stories that fill those two rules, feel free to share them

"Mmmm," I thought out loud, "No one makes muffins like Pinki-," I stopped dead" That was funny!

You got an thumps up from me!

Choose the one with rainbow frosting, it's freshly baked :pinkiecrazy:

This. Is. Fantastic!

I'm becoming more and more of a rabid fan of Doctor Who, is I might as well read this. :duck:

it's FANTASTIC!" He exclaimed.

I'm going to guess there's still a bit of 9th Doctor in him. :moustache:

... What? It's so meta that I can't believe it. :rainbowderp:

Hm, alrighty then. Not bad of a story, I'd say. A cool concept, for sure. But, I think you could have done better. Sure, how you portrayed Derpy Ditzy is pretty alright and all, but I think you could have maybe fleshed her interaction between her and the Doctor. There are also some grammatical errors in there as well. But, these are just my thoughts. :twilightsheepish:

Cute story!

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