Vizit meh on teh web! Drax99.deviantart.com
How did I get here, and what did I do to deserve the love of this wonderful mare? Well, let me tell you my story...
A short story about a human who fell into a strange land, was hated and feared by all, except for the one pony nopony else understood.
Inspired by the beautiful song I heard at Bronycon, sung by the amazing and talented ElieMonty.
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Hmm... Interesting... never went to brony con so sorry I'm staying oblivious
6363597 I'm kinda disappointed they haven't released any of he panel footage yet. There are a few I missed I want to see. The song is a cover she did of one originally sung by Jackleapp
I like it and I would love to see a sequel:D
Well i liked it ,but i tell you when Princess Shiny Heine finds out hes there there's trouble ahead.
Please don't shoot me for what I'm about to say, but I didn't really feel it for this one. A few fun concepts that I did like but a lot that I didn't.
I do see some potential for this story to be a series, but I feel it needs to be rewritten and streamlined to get everything across in the pace and tone that it needs to.
So in conclusion it feels like a story that got rushed. It just needs some work and a proofread.
6364582 Thats fine, this was never meant to be some grand magnum opus, but just a short writing excorsize to get my skills back in shape. It did get to be a bit longer than I was planning, but that always seems to happen. Also, it was only half edited, since my normal editor is still slacking off, and the new editor only got to see it half finished. Trust me, I know it needs work, but I'm still happy with it
I regret that I have but one thumbs up to give. Great story. Even better back story for Discord.
6363623 Well Den. And the song by jackleapp was autumn leaves which had BDP And derpy hooves and somebody else if I'm correct
That was good.
6383983 No that was bucking great! " Did you want the story of how me and this lovely grey mare became romantically involved? "YES !!!!
One of the best stories on here.
More please
Old story, but Rainbow Dash is an ass. No real guilt at all. Main character forgave her too easily, a real issue in many pony hurts human stories.
It's a bit silly he can't hear their names. It really should be resolved in someway.