All I Needed was Rain.

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During a horrible drought, Fluttershy's home is put into a danger zone. Rainbow Dash takes her in and all is well until Rainbow receives a special request.

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Chapter 1. · 4th Nov 2012 · 2,305 words
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Chapter 2. · 26th May 2012 · 2,283 words
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Chapter 3. · 26th May 2012 · 3,020 words
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Parcly Taxel #1 · May 27th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3. ·

Wall of text strikes again. Also, capitalisation issues.

AsciiDoughnut

AsciiDoughnut #2 · May 27th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1. ·

Pretty cool story so far. I don't see why it has all the thumbs down it has.

honeyhoneyhoney

honeyhoneyhoney #3 · Nov 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1. ·

Hi...

Um. *grimaces* Your story needs a makeover.

honeyhoneyhoney

honeyhoneyhoney #4 · Nov 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1. ·

*Here's mah tiny edit*

“Fire!!” yelled Rainbow Dash, before crashing. She coughed out dust, as she searched for… “Fluttershy!!” The yellow mare eeped, as Rainbow grabbed her shoulders. “There’s a-- ” She stopped midway, coughing out some dust.

“Rai-Rainbow Dash… umm… are you alright?”

“Hah! I’m fine, Fluttershy!” She frowned. “The fire! Oh no, oh no, oh no. We gotta dash, Fluttershy. There’s a fire in the Everfree, near your place!! And the weather-pegasi don’t have enough water!” Fluttershy shivered lightly.

“A fi-fi-fire-KYAAA!!!!” Fluttershy dropped her groceries as Rainbow Dash snatched her hoof, and flew into the air. The coarse wind blew through her mane. Shaken, but safe, they were soon standing before her cottage. The sky was shrouded with thick smoke.

Fluttershy galloped towards her home, able to hear her animal friends’ screams. Small critters were pouring from their trees, and larger creatures were pouring from the forest. “Oh no.” A few more animals ran by, completely ignoring Fluttershy’s pleas. Several minutes trickled by, until several weather-ponies had ordered her to evacuate the premises. Fluttershy wiped her teary eyes, and then nodded weakly.

Rainbow Dash flew up behind Fluttershy. “Shy, you can bunk with me.” She gave a small hug. “It’ll be awesome!! And I’m sure everything will be fine!!!” She grinned. “Maybe, I can finally convince you to live in the clouds, like a real Pegasus!” Rainbow did a heroic-looking pose.

“I don’t know Rainbow… umm… I wouldn’t want to impose on you. Ma-maybe… I should just wait aroun-“

“Nonsense, Fluttershy! You’re like my closest Pegasus friend.” Rainbow smirked. “C’mon I can show you all my new flying tricks.” Fluttershy stared at the floor.

“Thank yo-KYAA!!!” Fluttershy flew backwards, as Rainbow dragged her into the sky. Suddenly, Rainbow Dash dumped her onto a cloud.

“Rainbow,” she frowned a tinsy-bit, noticing the cloud-house. “You should not-”

“Geez, are you still on that? I told you!” Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes.

“Oh. Okay. If you are absolutely sure… But… umm… If I overstay my welcome, please feel free to kick me out at any time.” Fluttershy nodded, satisfied in her reply. She quickly trotted up the puffy cloud stairs, casting one last glance to the dark smoke in the distance.

honeyhoneyhoney