Octavia Philharmonica, the sweet young cellist with hopes and dreams to spare, has finally saved enough bits to move to Canterlot, the city where dreams are made! However, Octavia is greeted with more disdain than she expected; not that she had been expecting any to begin with. She's such an innocent pony, why would anyone think she was a horrible thug?
Follow Octavia as she tries her best to traverse the city, and deal with the ponies that seem to hate her for something she can't help, and the ponies who see her for who she is, and give her a chance.
A one shot to keep myself from getting too soft in my writing while I wait for a muse for my more popular story, "Octavia Crashes a Party and Wins a Roommate". Enjoy!
Octavia is best pony.....
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i like it
i hope for more
now enjoy this story it is for all to adore
yeesh, I know the feeling. Every school I went to eventually pulled me out of the room to ask if I was doing drugs, because I, by default, look stoned at any point before lunch. I'm also Whiter than sour cream, skinny as hell...People used to think I had an eating disorder. No, my metabolism is just freakishly fast.
staring
fury? flurry?
Either way, nice one, definitely your best one yet.
Well by the time i sit down and read it. Someone already corrected the mistakes i see. O well its good to have an extra set of eyes
Awesome story by the way
Woah, it's been a while since I've been on my computer to check out my comments and things, and it seems this story is getting a good response. I should keep better tabs on my work!
6338764 Thank you! I'll be sure to make those corrections right away! I knew there was something up with my spelling of staring...
6345192 Thank you! It's fine if you checked a bit late, as long as the quality is good, and you're doing a great job
But that being said, I better shove off and make another chapter for my other story before I forget.
*Slinks off into a dark alley wearing shackles and a beer can in hand*
Do you think you'll write a sequel to this? I'd like to see another story about your version of my favorite BG ponies.
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I have been thinking about making a sequel to this, and all the ideas seem to be slipping from me. I might make another story based on this universe, but my other stories have similar characterizations of the same BG ponies, with Octavia being a doe-eyed youth, Vinyl being a suave but naive and famous DJ, and Lyra and Bon Bon being a cute couple.
6379531 Well that's fine with me. I can't get enough of this musical BG pony duo.
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I definitely agree with that. These two are the coolest mix! I think I just like them because they seem to represent me really well....
At least Octavia does anyway!