• Published 7th Aug 2015
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Cupcakes Aftermath - Alemandom04

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Chapter 6: Cupcakes?

Fluttershy woke up in the hospital."Your awake." said Twilight.

"They said you weren't gonna make it, but you did." said Buttercups.

"I'm glad i'm still alive." said Fluttershy. They all hugged.

"The doctor said you're good to leave when you become unconscious." said Twilight."Let's take you home."

They all walked to Fluttershy's house."Thank you for taking me home. You can go now."

They left a few minutes later. Fluttershy was tired and went to bed.

She fell asleep not long after she lay down. A few hours later she was awoken by noise in her room.

"Hello is anypony there?".

"Hello, would you like to help me make cupcakes?"






The End

Comments ( 13 )

Hello I think i can help you... your story is about 7/10 above average instead of scripting like for a play try narrator format.

I hate the story cupcakes*starts to shiver uncontrollably*..........

7158570 This story was very short and rocky. It was my first story too, so it was pretty bad.

7158991 I'm not talking about your story, I'm talking about where your urge to write about the aftermath originated!! *Shivers harder* And everyones going to have a rocky start here an there!:twilightsmile: Just look at my first fic.........

7158570 Too bad... Oh, I forgot, I need help for baking cupcakes, mind to help me?:pinkiecrazy:

7378667 Pretty funny. Just, if you don't mind me asking. What's the secret ingredient?

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YOU silly:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: and Gizmo Gear too
*take a knife, start laughing in a creepy way, and use some power to teleport Pinkamena to help him*
Heh, felling generous... Pinkamena, give him a quick death, I'll go catch lil' Gizmo. IT'S TIME FOR A PARTY

7380218 Lol Please don't kill us... we're just innocent story writers trying to have fun... :fluttercry:

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*chose* Oh! F**k it!, *release them* go BUT don't tell anypony or anyone OR ELSE...
*teleport pinkamena at his side* She's gonna have a LOT of cupcakes*teleport pinkamena back to her dimension* Hope that was clear, I'll be seeing you.

7389131 I don't even know anymore... what is life... lol thanks for the friendly conversation Hope to see you in more of my comments. Just don't murder anyone else...

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