After the invention and successful tests of wormhole transportation, the newly discovered planet Kepler 50-31b was chosen as the first planet for scientific research. A probe was launched thorough the wormhole, carrying advanced detecting equipment and constructed with highly resilient carbon nanotubes.
But it also carried a record. A Golden Record
Except that the Big Bang Theory has nothing to do with the generation of artificial black holes by the LHC. There is an astronomically small chance of creating one. It'd just evaporate due to Hawking radiation in nanoseconds.
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The idea is that it should be impossible to create with the levels of energy in the LHC
http://news.nationalpost.com/news/world/scientists-seek-to-debunk-big-bang-with-help-from-large-hadron-collider-rainbow-gravity-parallel-universes
love the story
I hope that there will be more really really soon
"a Starswirl-Clover Bridge."
No just no
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Redshirt has a point. Creating a black hole from smashing two hadrons together isn't reliable. And even if it does form it would evaporate pretty much instantaneously due to having such a minuscule mass. Your probe would have to be traveling at a huge speed to avoid being cut in half by your wormhole closing up with the probe half-way through. And even then, wormhole's might to be formed (Theoretically) by electrical and/ or spinning black holes.
It seems a bit....... fast...
Or it might just be me, eh!
It seems a bit fast paced A few chapters could even bee done just concerning the content of the record.
As RedShirt stated, that doesn't make the Big Bang Theory false. Not at all. In fact, the creation of black holes has nothing to do with the BBT at all. The creation of black holes are simply a mathematical and physical calculation. Think of it this way. A star is just a giant mass of nuclear fuel, sustaining a fusion reaction. This force pushes outwards, while the gravity (cause of the mass) presses it together. When the nuclear fuel is spent, it collapses in on itself. If it's sufficiently large, the outer parts of the star is expanded into a super nova which dissipates after a while. The core however compresses in on itself into a point which has seemingly zero volume. This is called a singularity. When this happens, it would require a velocity greater than the speed of light to escape the gravity, and since there is nothing that exceeds this, nothing can escape. Not even photons. (Light)
Now, on to the LHC. It's calculated that one would need 10^19 GeV (Electron Volt) to create a black hole. The LHC is designed to project 14 TeV and at maximum 1150 TeV. By this account, you'd need a ring accelerator about 1000 light years in diameter to just keep the particles on track, and the energy requirements is literally thousands of years away. We'd have to tame the entire power of a sun to come close to that.
And like he said before me. Micro Black Holes would instantly vanish due to Hawking radiation.
Now on to the next thing. Wormholes have nothing to do with black holes. While it's true that black holes influence space-time, a wormhole is simply the theory that you can bend the universe and punch a hole through the fabric of space-time and send something through. Wormholes aren't impossible, at least according to general relativity (Which is basically the structure on which basically ALL of our physics are built upon.)
I like the idea you have, but if you're gonna keep it up to standard you're gonna have to do more research.
That thing was nuclear powered? Great, the crash probably ruptured something important and now the craft is leaking radiation. Humanity extends the hand of friendship to an alien species, and it gives them all cancer. Yup that about sums up the human race.
Ah, horseapples the human are going to screw this up, I can see it now. Hopefully if the ponies try and make contact it will be with some more peaceful humans not these scientists!
Fuckin' StarSwirl taking credit for everything.
such a good premis and easy to follow but chapters are to short for how fact the pacing can be and it just leaves you on the edge of your seat like a weekly drama show
but still great thing should come of this one
I CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Interesting use of a time skip here. It would have been nice to see what happened in between the humans seeing the images and the epilogue but it was a good job overall! Good luck in your future writings!
Contact establishment and negotiations, I demand to see!
Well. That de-escalated quickly.
I would like to see this expanded in future; please keep it under consideration.
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I WILL definitely remake this story into something amazing, but only after a couple one-shots and more followers
I was about to say YOU CANT END IT LIKE THAT
But thanks for telling
*sniff* MOOOAAARR idk if its compete. still MOOOOAAAARRRR
The physics are wrong. Rather than being specific and wrong, try vague and right:
Wormholes are hypothetically possible, but require so much energy to create and are so unstable as to be practically impossible. Try this:
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Another poorly written Scientific Article. Luckily, the very first commentator nailed it:
You used "prove" when you mean "'probe".
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You need not worry about the ponies developing cancer. Cancer would require years to devolop, but the intense radiation will kill the ponies in hours.
Except for the part where Star Swirl was responsible for just about every important advance in human history, I enjoyed it. Nice.
That happened.
Science checks out, but this TBH I'm not really enjoying this as a story, so far that is.
Yup, Im not too fond of it, keep trying.
*suffers heart attack* that is not appreciated background. And let's face it, humans being humans, this should end in complete total disasterous failure.
What... What the hell are you doing! you don't just skip 300 years! I just... No... I hope you rewrite this soon, cause the let me say, the theory you have, is great, magnificent, keep it. But the execution was just either illl thought out or just lazy. Sorry I'm being so harsh but I didn't enjoy this story. I will however, keep an eye on it, pls fix soon.
Don't take it too hard by the way, it's like tasting the best food in the world than going back to food for mere mortals, it ain't the same anymore, I'm too far gone.
keep writing and getting better, if you stop, then You will get a dislike.
you just butchered the Einstein rosen bridge, but otherwise its okay.
the link to the picture is broken
So the ponies contaminated a culture? Fucking nuke them.
It... was okay, I guess. Though, Starswirl did a big no-no by becoming God to a lesser race and contaminating the culture(s?), and with it suddenly ending right there and far into the future... yeah, this can be improved upon greatly to make it more appealing.
Corto, pero intenso.