"Write about what really interests you, whether it is real things or imaginary things, and nothing else." -C. S. Lewis
Ponies live in Equestria by day under Celestia's Sun, and Vamponies live by night under Luna's Moon. 15 years ago Vamponies made themselves known to all of Equestria over night, some came to feast, some for conquest, and some for peace. But now as the possibility of war looms over head, will peace be able to last, or will Equestria drawn in its own blood as the vamponies drink their fill.
Authors note: tags and characters may change until the story is compleat
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Not bad
This is pretty good. I would recommend rereading this chapter backwards to find spelling errors. Like instead of my first sentence in this comment normally, read it like "good pretty is this."
That will force you to pay close attention to a word, and if you come across a homophone like 'your' and 'you're' always read that like "you are" when writing. If it doesn't make sense then your is correct. Same with 'there' 'their' and 'they're,' as you did get the wrong form of it somewhere up there. With the other two forms of there try to remember that their is possessive while there is referring to location.
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Thank you, I'll keep that in mind
Mi kiedo ke fine ha fatto TWILIGHT e il resto delle MANE SIX
I hope this story is not dead....
All good things most come to and end some day