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Yep. Definitely need more.
I will endeavour to fulfill your needs and wants.
6336658 Please, enlighten me as to what you liked about the story. I find it just as important to learn one's strengths as well as their weaknesses.
6336678 Oh, uh... Well, I'm really not the best person to ask that. When I read, I normally zoom through it. I could tell you what happened, but any more details than that escape me.
It was a game I enjoy, and the grammar was not horrendous, that's about it.
If you need a criticism, I guess that the wisp just suddenly appearing in their cave/rest area was a bit far fetched to me, but with everything else, just keep going full steam!
6336678 Understandable. Thank you for your time, sir.
6336695 I can try to read it over again in a little bit if that would help. I need to practice not doing what I do while reading.
6336695 That would be appreciated.
6336714 Will do. But first I gotta read where Lex Luthor steals 40 cakes from Celestia. 40 cakes! That's as much as four tens! And that's horrible!
6336718 Take your time, my friend.
6336724 Alright... Gave it another read, and I still can't really find that much wrong with it. Only a couple things caught my eye, like Daring Do isn't grey, she's more a tan-ish color.
img07.deviantart.net/0941/i/2013/341/4/e/daring_do_by_90sigma-d6x5lm7.png
See? Somewhere between dark khaki and arylide yellow.
Also, she seems incredibly irritable, as shown in the scene in the cave, snapping at Lithic and Shock for some reason, but that might be for something that'll be revealed later in the story.
I couldn't see any spelling errors, no grammatical errors that I could see, and the descriptions of the City, Castle, and Throne Room were beautifully done. The only thing I am even slightly apprehensive about is how the story will progress, but I can't judge on that until the story is written.
So I'm really excited to see this story develop, good luck to ya!
EDIT: Wait, why does the wisp have to be a pet of the King? One of them said that Wisps are the spirits of ponies that haven't left yet, so couldn't it be a spirit of a pony who lived in Aurora? Or was it only for Terrarian NPC's?
6336851Point taken.
6336863 Our little secret?
6336863 Heh, thanks. Since you're making a story about Terraria, I'm assuming you've played it. You have it on steam?
6336866 Aye.
6336867 I am afraid not, although I would like to. Nay, I am afraid I must settle with the Xbox version.
6336890 Damn... I was hoping to friend you on steam.
6336892 Judging from your reaction, is it safe to assume you do not own a console?
6336913 No. I own a PS3 and Xbox One, but I'm primarily on PC.
Edit: And no Xbox Live Gold.
6336915 Ah, quite a shame.
6336944 Do you have Steam at all?
6336946 Woe and misfortune, for I am afraid I do not.
6336974 It is free.
6336975 Is it? I wasn't aware of that. But, I am afraid anything pc related will have until I can get a powerful computer.
6337013 The software Steam is free by itself, but the games cost money.
6337017 Ah, I see. But once again, I must wait until I have acquired a new computer with sufficient capabilities for gaming.
6337022 Kay.
6337024 It was delightful chatting with you, but I am afraid I must return to planning and writing my stories. Good day.
6337054 Alright mate, talk to you next chapter.
This story needs an update
the story's plot is very interesting and the grammar is good.
you have earned my like
6563068 Tis coming, my friend. I simply thought it best to update my other stories first.
If he's the King, then who his subjects were? NPSs? And I guess, you'd like change 'pets' to 'companions' - that sounds somewhat better if they are someway conscious.
Also, rainbow bricks... How much Hallow is in the world? Or it slowly dissolved into the usual biomes, fueling magic, making everything rainbow and pony while not being a danger anymore? This also explains why gemstones are found already cut and shiny in Equestria then.
And I guess then that Celestia is Solar, Luna is Vortex, Twilight is Nebula, and Cadence is Stardust(yes, stars are Luna's, but as princess of Love Cadie should be more proficient with summons). Sombra might have stumbled on a patch of Corruption then, and Discord can be in base a Chaos Elemental, but greatly evolved. Chrysalis - no idea, but judging by chitin, she's from Desert. Timberwolves might be shards of Mourning Wood. Everfree - form of Jungle. Tartarus can match for Underworld. And the Smooze is an ultimate slime. A bit tough, but is fits).
6644972 Indeed. But the range of his subjects had a much wider scope. But that shall be revealed later.
6647483 This story is still alive, right? I really was enjoying it.
6713199 Of course it is. Just having some time constraints is all. Should be out within...oh, say about three weeks. Two months maximum. Maybe even less than two weeks though, since you have reminded me to get some work done on this story as well. Having so many stories can be a bother. Oh well!
6713212 That's why I focus on two at the absolute maximum. Mostly one. Let's hope it's soon mate.
6713227 Aye.
so long, and FINALLY, A FUCKING CHAPTER.
I progressed so much since you posted the last chapter, from barely out of hardmode to post-space-cthulu.
I like it. Keep going.
6759689 So I shall.
6759686 Apologies for the delay. Did you at least have fun killing monsters and surviving the night?
img09.deviantart.net/51c4/i/2012/060/4/8/daring_do_inspects_a_trap_by_theaceofspadez-d4rfqgv.png i found a mistake
6771338 Read over it again, earlier on I explain that she is wearing a gray coat. Not fur.
7333843 Understandable, just keep in mind it's only because that's what I decided to classify Terrarian's as. It's not your typical HiE, I can tell you that.
8909666 I was. Because I am a fool and I was lashing out. Go ahead and dislike me, or report me. I will take the punishment freely.
Holy shit, it's been 4 years since this came out.
Time flies, good lord.
This is really amazing, It's one of the few crossovers stories I actually like with Terraria x something else. I know it's already been like 5ish years and the last reply is like 2 years old. But can't wait for the next chapter, one can hope right?