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Gloria Beezus Rose

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Darkness can be in a heart and nopony will ever find out what the mare is truly about. So they cry over a mystery that can be solved until a clue arises and the heart is revealed. A mares heart can be as black as night and a cold as ice. The dark secret will ruin everything, you love dear. It depends on what you do when someone finds out what you've done will you redeem yourself of cast you self into the deepest part of the shadow. A choice can change everything and if you choose wrong you can throw it all away all your hopes. Can you truly be as black as night even if you repent? Cast away everything. Cast it all away for power. Power is a motive to do everything. The word Power who would be a princess when they could be a Queen?

Huge thanks to the editors, Twilight Shine, BlackRoseRaven and, Honest Wisdom

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 9 )
4l3x #2 · Jun 16th, 2015 · · · 1 ·

Here's a better source for your image, I feel its better to link directly to the original.

Not bad not bad, but I have to say this. Grammar check is needed.

Hoo boy, I love the story so far and enjoy the idea of Sombra being Hella friendzoned. But good ideas turn into trainwrecks if they don't have someone to keep things clean. So I'm just going to appoint myself editor and I'll send you a PM with the Corrections.

Comment posted by Gloria Beezus Rose deleted Jun 27th, 2015
LOL101 #6 · Jun 27th, 2015 · · · a2 ·

I really liked this! MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::flutterrage:

6139438 I going to be updating the chapter soon mkay?

I'm not sure if I should continue the story, reply if you have something to say.

I really loved the story!! More?))):

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