• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen April 14th

Mr Extra


I just wanna do a thing, make it cool, and get better at it. Input, critical and otherwise, is always appreciated.

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Source

A collection of short stories written during various writing competitions. The contents of stories are varied.
Note: Any and all constructive critiques are appreciated

Alive and Wubbing It - Random, Comedy
Between Adventures - Slice of life
Futility - Dark, Alternate Universe
Gone Fishing - Comedy
On Your Wavelength - Comedy

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 15 )

To anyone who decides this needs a down-vote:

Please explain why you didn't like it, if you can, so that I can address the issues these stories have now and in the future.

I appreciate your input, whatever it may be.

6046964 Thanks! I'm glad to hear that.

Both stories are awesome! I read Alive and Wubbing It in a serious tone, and it was awesomazing!

I really loved this story in the WriteOff. It was one of my top picks because of the hilarity and ridiculousness of it all. Nice work! I definitely wubbed it.

This was an interesting one short story. Time for me to read the others.

Interesting I love the personification you put in there.

I’m just going to say all these stories are pretty good in a matter of fact.

This is my favourite story of course because it has my favourite character Rainbow Dash in it.

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Thanks for the comments!

Will this ever get continued?

9098950
Honestly, I didn't realize people were reading it.

9104853
So can I assume it's dead?
because in that case, I'll stop tracking it.

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If you wanna read it, I'll try to put in some work.

If I might ask, what did you like here? I'm always looking to improve.

9104906
The stories themselves were at least entertaining, and the first two were charming.

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