Sunny's A Player!
Sunset Shimmer asked, "I'm bored. Do you want to talk about friendship now?"
"Sunset Shimmer do you know anything about friendship?"
"I don't."
"Well, when I said I knew everything about friendship, HA, I lied!"
"You idiot! You have deceived me!"
"What are you gonna do?"
"First we'll play Hide and Seek. Then, I'll find the Friendship Police and report you to it."
They played hide and seek. Trixie hid behind the door of the school's Security Office. When she found her there, touching a firearm she knows not to touch, Sunset took the firearm away, grabbed her by the hand, then opened the front doors of Canterlot High, put Trixie's hand out of hers, and then out Trixie was. Trixie subsequently was found by police, and was arrested. Trixie was sent to jail for two months, then sent back to Canterlot high upon her release from prison.
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What exactly did I just read?
6042235
I'm asking the same thing...
I'm so confused..
You know what I'm just gonna give my go to answer.
Brah, we smoked some weed before we came here.
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6042235
It's like that because the actual source material was a story like that. Problem is, I injected mine with intentional hilarity, while Dark Rarity's story got humourous value all by itself - and didn't need to be sold or marketed as having such.
Kudos for the blatant and shameless self-promotion in the Sunset Shimmer group.
As for the actual story... good attempt, but I seriously don't understand what I read.
6075616 That's the whole point of this story. You are not supposed to understand it, you're supposed to be entertained by it and the fact that it is intentionally a lot funnier than Dark Rarity's story consisting of similarly short chapters (which you can see by clicking here).
6075632 Yeah, but it's not really entertaining. I didn't find it funny at all. In fact I'd say I liked the other one better. I'm not trying to be rude, honestly. I personally just didn't find any humor in it.
6075603
I get what your saying, just to me this story makes no sense, neither did the original.
You took an extremely downvoted story and made a new story with it. You didn't really change anything and regretfully I don't think it will get a good response. I'm not saying this to be rude, I'm just stating what I see.
Good try, funny promotion, but this isn't my cup of tea.
6075687 I know that. This story is designed to point this out. It's in the tradition of the old Stan Freberg records, where Freberg, while not changing things in the parody, pointed out what was wrong with the original in the parody.
6075603
that explains a lot, thank you.