26 years old, Bipolar Disorder, Asperger's Syndrome, am legally blind, and am a born again follower of Jesus Christ! I like Pinkamena/Pinkie and Fluttershy best. Send me a message if you wanna chat!
Pinkie Pie knows she's being watched; she knows about how 'The Wall' follows her around, makes her do things she's not sure she would actually do at times, and most of all, she worries about what will happen when it comes to an end.
When the last season ends.
For a waaaaaay better take on this story idea, read this.
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Nice story here, really enjoying it and the concept.
Interesting... wonder if there would be a story where Pinkie speaks to someone from the Wall?
5775854 Yeah, definitely interesting, I'll give you that...
Awesome.
5775854 Thanks! ^_^
5776431 XD
Nice beginning! Way to go! Hope that you'll write other chapters soon...
5784217 thanks! ^_^
Wow. Nice work. I've never thought about the world that way and thinking of how "the wall" of viewership would influence the pony that could see it is both unnerving and fascinating. Also saw a few of your ideas from your reviews where you talk about the ponies of the show acting out of character. All very interesting.
6140960 Glad you think so ^_^
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That's definitely an interesting theory.
6158600 Glad you think so!
6158613 And honestly I wouldn't be surprised at it either, considering Pinkie's ability of fourth wall breaking is second to that of Deadpool's.
6161516 That's why I wrote this X3
6161706 Imagine if Hasbro actually did do that.
6161829 oh jeez
6161884 I actually don't know why they don't have her breaking the fourth wall in fact, that'd probably sky-rocket her popularity.
6162988 She stares at the camera a lot. And does gags involving the fourth wall.
6163307 True, but I mean like a serious wall-breaker. Like talking to the audience or something of that nature.
6164112 oh yeah, it'd be awesome if she directly addressed the audience.
The closest was at the end of 'Over a Barrel'.
6164119 How close was that exactly?
6166042 At the end Twilight narrated her letter to Celestia and at the end she said 'You've got to share, you've got to care.'
Pinkie stops the closing circle and goes 'Hey! That's what I said!' then goes back into the show and lets it close.
6167025 Oh that's right!
Yeah that was pretty close to an audience wall-breaker.
i did a dramatic read of your fan ifc
6316827 oh wow, really? Thanks so much! ^_^
6318538 no problem, remember writers can vote
6318569 oh um ok
How did you publish less than a thousand words?
7543055 There's an unpublished second chapter. I had planned to make this a series but cancelled that idea really early on, not long after it was posted. What this story is now is what used to be a prologue.
Well my pink friend, it's a simple really.
As long as The Wall has visited at least once, you and the world will exist in somebody else's memories. Which is enough to continue your life and others.
Even adding more to it.
Read this 2!
Hello 2015 I come from the future do you say hello
9621759
Of course! Hello!
It does certainly feel like a prologue... There could be more...
Hidden chapters? H-m-m...
By now it's just an idea of a story. If it ends here, then, well... A good plot wasted
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Sorry to disappoint, I know how seeing a good idea go to waste feels awful... 
Yeah I agree that it was an idea with potential, but it wasn't very well executed by me. Doesn't help that it was one of my earlier stories.
The only other chapter written was a rushed second chapter for the sake of submitting the story, since it required a 1,000 word length at least to be approved. It basically was a POV of pinkie from Episode 1 of the show, with pretty much nothing added to the original plot.
Thanks for checking it out though and leaving a comment.
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Argh, hearing your sadness through words and seeing your profile picture (sad Pinkie with straightened mane) don't help...
If it may be of consolation, for rather disappointing stories I have a bookshelf with "disappointment" in its title. "May have wasted a good plot" is exactly what it say on its "tin", and stories might improve, if worked-on. Disappointing stories, on the other hand, are not expected to improve, so... Wait, haven't I read some of the stories of yours? Hum-m-m... Can't remember, must have been some time ago...
Well this has sequel material with the show ending already