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Alas Negras
I'm a young spanish brony. Passionate reader of MLP fanfics. Fantasy writer. Veterinary student. Always open to make new friends ^w^
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This is a good story, might want to go through and correct some of the grammar errors in it, it would help it flow better
Actually I have my proofreader for that, but if you want to tell me my mistakes, I will appreciate it. Six eyes are better than four
My fault, fixed.
This looked super adorable and nice.
Then I saw the spoilered warning.
Holy hell.
5826528 I understand you, it sounds horrible. But it's not exactly that you think.
>Warning: rape
Outta fucking nowhere.
Right now, I almost have finished Chapter II
Try not to make it too sad and dark.
The light can't exist without the darkness.
i love it
....i havent read something like this in a while and i really love it (minus the grammar errors)....please make more
I'm glad that you like it. Sry for mistakes, English is not my first language, but I do my best efforts for improving. You tell me fails and I will fix it.
A TON of errors, most being wrong gender words like him and himself, when referring to females. Otherwise, awesome!
I fixed all I saw.
If you find more mistakes, call me.
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This is better in my opinion!
5909317 It's really amazing, but I still prefer Fire and Fury. Anyway, thanks.
Yay, an update~! So what is Rainbow's problem, anyway?
Rainbow is a simple girl with simple wishes, but about love... she has a dark secret.
You'll know more in the next chapter
This story needs some POTATO EDITING. DU DU DU DUUUU.
I'm really liking this story thus far, reading it I notice a few gender references which need help, like a his were a her should be and etc. Also good luck with exams!
Thanks so much
now I've just finished half of them. I have the new chapter ready, but in Spanish, this weekend it will be translated.
It starts to get my interest. Go on.
All in all the story is good so far. The only part I don't want to buy is making Fluttershy an orphan. It just feels like sadness for the sake of sadness. Like a cheap trick to induce sympathy or feelings. At this point it seem to be not necessary for the float of the story itself. Fluttershy could have left Cloudsdale just because of bullying. It doesn't make a story better if you stack more drama as necessary.
But besides this it is really a fine dramatic story so far.
It's good hear it, thanks
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About your comment, I only can say you that ALL is important in this story. Fluttershy is not an oprhan as literary resource.
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Finily!
Chapter 5 is here!
Now... why does it takes so long?
Umm, let me think... it's summer, holidays, not a good time for inspiration. But I'm working on Chapter VI right now.
The profile pic, doe. SO CUTE. Aaaand, I have feeling I'm going to cry...Maybe, Maybe not, IT'S NOT A DATE.
"Aww, Fluttershy..! Sooo cute."
It's Mares and Gentlestallions.
Fillies = Little Female Pony.
Colt = Little Male Pony.
Yay!
I take that as "Guy, your story is fuc*** awesome, if you don't write more I'll kill myself" XD.
Why..So...Sad!??!?!??!? WHHYHYHYHY! I knew it was going to be sad, but this..WHY!
Take it EXACTLY like that. XD. I love the part when Fluttershy just slaps Rainbow.
Funny thing about this fanfic
I keep forgetting what the title is, and end up remembering it as "the one where Dashie oofs her bf"
and then when I go looking for some flutterdash fanfics I find it, read it, and go like "Aha found you"
only to forget the name, and repeat the process again
Needless to say, this is a 'one for the books' fic, since its able to gnaw at my aging memory despite forgetting it countless times(who am I kidding, I'm getting old)