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Jaida857


Sometimes I like to write stories

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When you've loved somepony ever since you were fillies, what do you do? What if they're you best friend? Is bringing your true feelings to light worth risking the friendship?

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 27 )

It's interesting to see how Fluttershy wants to take things slowly. I think Dash was a bit OOC at the end of the third chapter, but overall, good work.

I hope to see more of this story, although I see where it might be headed considering the mare in the first chapter. I have to agree with the above poster a bit that the end did feel a little OOC, but can be explained if done properly considering Dash's speedy nature.

this is just the type of cute flutterdashie story i was looking for

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remember everypony, anypony, somepony

Awww soooo cute:fluttercry::applecry::raritydespair::heart::rainbowkiss: but yeah one more thing BRING IT ON SOME MORE!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Ohhh, good. I was afraid the mare was going to beat Fluttershy up a one point.

Good chapter! I can't wait to see who blow Torch is.

Hmm I have a feeling Blow Torch is trying to get at Rainbow Dash for some reason, but oh well Fluttershy would kill him so BRING ON SOME MORE!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

After looking at the chapter name and then actually reading the chapter itself, I think I might know where this is going. If my theory is correct, then this is gonna be VERY interesting. :pinkiecrazy:

Blow Torch...

There's no way that this ends well. None.

Yup.

Looking forward to the reversal in part 2.

It appears I'm having cardiac arrest for how cute that chapter was. But in all seriousness this was a SMASHING (I swear fimfiction needs to add a Nigel emoticon) chapter. It was kinda obvious though that either Torch would turn out to be either a good friend or some evil pony. That aside everything else was great.

Cheers,
jangledorf

P.S: is Torch a reference to Shawnay631? (He calls himself torch)

@jangledorf I'm aware it was obvious xD But thanks.

And no, I've actually never heard of him :3 Torch is just a random character I made up.

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Wait, so Rainbow has been raped in the past?! Um, out of curiosity how many times?

Hmm damn it sucks that back then in Cloudsdale she was raped that really sucks, but at least Fluttershy came to the rescue:eeyup::yay::rainbowkiss::heart:

@anut9
@DarknessDragon78

That was basically what I was implying, but I didn't want to explicitly say it in case readers weren't okay with that. As for how many times... here's a little spoiler, I'm actually planning on going into that part of her life a lot deeper in a future chapter. It won't ever get past a PG13 rating at the absolute highest, but it should give a pretty detailed analysis of what her life was like in those years.

Mwahahahha. She shoulda sent some squirrels to collect his nuts after that! And by nuts I mean .. um... :scootangel:

This supports my theory ahem THE RESiDENTS OF PONYVILE ARE ASSHOLES :flutterrage: but anyways im likeing this its cute

im guessing he wants to get with Dash.........HOW DARE HE GET BETWEEN THERE LOVE,:flutterrage:

I'm liking this. A lot. They are so cute together in it. I would love to see this finished.

Only :ajbemused:&:twilightangry2: disagree...
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WHAT HAPPENED TO LOVE & TOLERANCE!

Wow, that one pony was such a jerk. Like, unbelievably. And those bystanders were awful too, not one would say a word against it? Even though Fluttershy is one of the ponies that has saved their world? Well, glad RD came in.

This was beautiful! I loved it!

It is so beautiful how you set them up to stand by each other, no matter what and on equal footing.

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