Lightning Rider has been living in ponyville (or above it) with Rainbow Dash for almost a month. Her life is pretty good. But for some reason, she can't seem to make friends. She tried with the cutie mark crusaders but they just shut her out. No pony else really wanted to. Some foals ask to play with her but is usually out of pity. Also she feels overwhelming sadness because she can't seem to remember who she used to be. This leads to her crying a lot in secret. This routine is the same until one colt sees her crying and wants to be her friend.
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Where= an adverb that denotes the physical location of something.
Were= past tense of was
We're = we are
This needs a good editor.
5936794 Hi?
Why so many dislikes?
6017859 Something I don't get my friend.
5745729 Personally, I think it is. There are some mistakes but what Fanfiction doesn't? So calm down 5936913