Rarity versus Cancer Pagurus

An unoriginal story idea, wherein Rarity fights an embiggened crab, because I spent way too much time on EQD once upon a time.

Rarity experiences Murphy's Law firsthoof, and The Great and Powerful Trixie learns of a new pastime.

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Bugsydor

Bugsydor #1 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · ·

Instead of "feign," the combat maneuver you are thinking of is called a "feint." Rather fitting word, considering its similarity to the word "faint" and the star of the story.

I'd say this wasn't a bad fight scene.

SirNotAppearingInThisFic

SirNotAppearingInThisFic #2 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

5800829 A quick look-up of both words suggests that either would be acceptable. Also, in my defense, I had no idea what I was doing at the time. Honestly, using 'feint' might get confusing, given the star of the story.

Bugsydor

Bugsydor #3 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · ·

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Really, it's a matter of how the words are used. You feint right or left, while feign shock over the not-so-startling development.

HiddenMaster

HiddenMaster #4 · Oct 14th, 2015 · · ·

All in all, not a bad fight scene. I kind of wish there had been a bit more story to it, but for what it is, it's pretty good, and everyone is in character. I especially enjoyed the end with Trixie.

HiddenMaster out.

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