Fluttershy gains a colt-friend. Rainbow gains jealousy. Twilight feels something is off about him- and must once more trust her instinct, even if it means some serious detective work with Pinkie and Spike. Meanwhile, Dash must change herself in ways she never thought possible. She has to end her torture
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this story has allot of potential. but it feels a bit rushed for emerald and fluttershy to be so close already. its only chapter 1. i would like to see more though. nice job
> Meets new pony
> Brings to lunch at Sugarcube Corner
> Now dating
I stopped reading as soon as Fluttershy agreed that she was dating him. You met this random pony near the Everfree Forest, know next to nothing about him, be polite and now you're dating?
I can't possibly read anymore. Characters being out of character is something I can't take well.
Fluttershy was REALLY out of character. See a stranger, open up completely to them? No. This is Fluttershy.
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Track to see it if it gets fixed.
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4 likes?
The initial connection made is supposed to give the effect of love between Fluttershy and Emerald. I'm foreshadowing a later part via rush. I'll try and explain more- but my words are considered to come from forked tongue, and my vocabulary of 'Old English', I will continue to update based on feedback.
by the........BY THE WHAT??!!!! must know!
Am I the only one who is really scared of what the THE is?
713434 the sudden realization that the writer trolled her.
Dear valued readers;
, and I had to rewrite the ENTIRE next chapter. Here it is. Thank-you everypony for your cooperation!
I apologize for the lengthy wait for the next part, but my computer crashed in the midst of me posting the next part
Is he a spy?
Everything went better than expected.
This is a great story. I Like how you used the dream, or nightmare as it were, to really capture Rd's emotions. Keep Writing!
Fort Of Clouds! Toatally somthing Rainbow Dash would do.
This was so awesome so far!
Thsi Has been a great chapter so far! I like the deception That Emerald is going to and the part about Epic's backround. Keep up the Geat work
P.S You sir have Been Watched
So if you're reading this attentively, thank you
. I'm writing on a crippled schedule: I play Hockey and Soccer competitively and I have six to ten hours of Hockey in a week, three hours of Soccer in which I'm the goalkeeper, and in addition I work as an electrician's assistant 
. If you could bear with me, that'd be appreciated. This fic will be my main focus. I'm pretty sure I have a mild form of ADD, or something 
, and if I have an idea for a different fic whilst writing this one, I HAVE TOn
write it in full, then come back to this one. I apologize for my DNA. 
It seemed Kind of rushed and jumbled, But nontheless great!
