Rarity has a few haunting things happen to her, and she can't deal with her pain any longer.
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Ik it's fast but it's supposed to be paced that way. Quick dream
848001That ending.......
Poor Rarity she finally got the stallion of her dreams only to find out he was a cheater, then she becomes pregnant and suffers a miscarriage, so sad.
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At least the child never grew up and died after somepony knew him well...
And besides, Spike was happy...
I really liked it..
until the ending. It was set up perfectly. And then it just..abruptly ends. Like "Oh, then her friend talks to her and it's all okay. The end." Meh, I dunno. I enjoyed it, but the ending left me wanting more. You still get a thumbs up.
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Thank you. My ADD forced me to end it that way. I swear.
Thank you for the thumbs up, bro. Moustache for you, sir. ---->
I think what you should have done was have Spike standing near the door when Twilight was talking to Rarity. And then when Rarity says that she wants him to roast her alive he bursts into the room, punches her in the face and yells at her for suggesting that. Then they confess their love for each other and kiss. the end.
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That could have worked if my mind could put them together where she did not deliver a miscarriage haha