The Golden Sea is an ancient desert with entire kingdoms now mostly buried under the scorching sand. A land so thick with legend and history it simply lay under the sand waiting to be unearthed. So, when Twilight is invited to go to an excavation in the desert she agrees, expecting to uncover ancient history. However, when she stumbles across an injured sphinx in the middle of the desert she quickly finds more than simple history remains hidden under the sands. Some mysteries are simply best to remain buried.
you might want to look this chapter over again its got small errors scattered around. but other than that, I think this is great! definitely need more stories with sphinxes in them!
season 7 ep 18 spoiler warning!
I'm hoping to see some fics with that sphinx character from the last new episode she was amazing!
8414191 Ah... so there is an episode with a sphinx in it, wasn't quite expecting that. Kinda reminds me that I should catch up on all the episodes that I have been missing. Still, thanks for the comment, much appreciated. Until next time,
-Sphinx
On a side note, could you point out some of the mistakes. I don't actually have anyone proofreading my stories (I kinda had some problems with proofreaders in the past). It would help out a fair bit.
(wouldn't saying "each side" be better?)
needs S for eyes.
needs S at opens.
would be better with "pretty much" instead of pretty "well" the whole trip.
find need an S.
feather needs. . . . . . . you guessed it! a S.
turn needs ing.
"can" is missing.
another s at "was going to be"
question needs s.
i'm should be replaced with I.
just realized I probably should have use red for errors instead of green. sorry if its hard to spot.
anyway I have done you a sevice. for my payment I want. . . . . . . . . the next chapter!
8415103 Much appreciated, had I looked through it myself I probably would have found only half, if that. I'm not too particularly perceptive when it comes to a single missing letter, as I seem to have a problem with... Anyways, now that I know someone is properly reading my story I really need to crack down on the next chapter, (was going to do it anyways, but now I have better motivation). Anyways, glad you like the story as of yet, or at least it seems that way. Either way I'm glad and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Ps, thank you for the comment on the story always good to see one.
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no problem and yes if I wasn't clear I am liking the story! I actually have the same problem with forgetting to add the ending S'es in my typing too, its pretty common. anyway got this In my tracking.