May you all 'Live Long and Prosper', your star-turtle never lose it's course, and your itty-bitty living space not cramp your Infinite Cosmic Power!!
Twilight wakes up the morning after repairing some books in her library, unaware of a certain embarrassing problem. Her & Rainbow's friends get some misconceptions, and prove to not be much help. This day is certainly NOT fine. (Set before Season 3)
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Get rid of the coloured text please, kinda annoying.
Uh...what? What was on Twilight's horn? Why did Pinkie and Rarity react like that? What did Pinkie mean about an infection? Why does Rainbow have some bandages on her butt? Applejack wanted to get Rainbow tested for what?
I'm sorry, I just don't understand any of this.
5630266 It does seem a little unclear to me as well. I believe the implication is that upon seeing Twilight with thick white stuff on her horn and mouth -- as well as Rainbow Dash leaving happily -- Rarity inferred that the two had sex. Instead of saying anything to Twilight, they instead allowed her to go around town with the glue on her horn and mouth.
Some constructive criticism: Only use things like colored text for special emphasis. Under normal conditions, colored text breaks immersion for the reader and is a waste of the writer's time. Colored text is acceptable when it is being used to show something very special. If an alicorn speaks in something above and beyond the Royal Canterlot Voice, then the words might use colored text to show how far beyond. If a character is having an out-of-body experience, that could be shown through color. A character who develops synethesia could have their experiences described with colored text to help impart the strangeness of the sensations.
A well executed example would be in It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door. The only place where colored text is used is when Rainbow is having an experience that goes far beyond the regular level of fantastic and magic in Equestria. It heightens the reader's sense that Rainbow is facing forces beyond mortal comprehension. The reader is made to imagine a setting where words are probably inadequate to fully convey the events.
A little clarity on the affliction they are assuming would be nice.
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Yeah, sorry, was trying to let the innuendos speak for themselves.
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Sorry about the color spray. Again, this was my first attempt using it. Will clean it up.
And thanks for the criticism.