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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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Since everyone has a Cybernetic body these days, it is perfectly normal and acceptable. One interesting advantage is that one can custom order one’s own body. No longer limited to what I was born with, or even what nature sees as your expected body type.

The Second Life effect is one interesting detail, that goes well with my new body. Makes for great entertainment. The Ghost in the shell does have a few less than convenient side-effects, sadly. One has to take the good with the bad and accept the price of the deal.

If only I had realised the fun in it. Yet, now I was here on my vacation from myself in the alternate body in a village named Ponyville. Of course, I am a Pony for the duration of my vacation and the Holiday too. Anything else would be a waste of time and effort, it would clearly defeat the purpose of my vacation. At least in my eyes.

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This short snippet is barely enough to form an opinion, but I gotta admit I like the premise of living like a pony in a pony town in the futuristic world of Ghost in the Shell.

If there is one thing I think is missing, it's the act of being in a quadruped body. You'd think there would be more commentary about it from the narrator. Then again, in Ghost in the Shell we've seen humans being placed in quite weird robot bodies (some of which are crab-like) so maybe their experience of the world is just different from what a non-converted human is like.

Also, I would expect that since the narrator chose a month long vacation in Ponyville, she'd have brushed up more on the subject of ponies.

5638773 Nice to see a change of pace. This is just the first chapter, the Premise is about as much as this should leave room for.
I only have a few Episodes of this show to go on, but this is part of the fun with the show, allowing you to physically experience life in this fashion.

Ponies as in Ponyville are Quadruped, so that part is bound to be both seen and felt in the story.
I am just using Narration rather sparringly. In the current POV, it is the first character who is experiencing what is going on.
To this point, we are following her in chosoing the vacation, pointing out facts that caught her eyes, as it were.
There is the Question as to what details serves the story straight up, the Cross is very tech-heavy, as I recall.
My story isn't based on the tech as such, just using it in order to carry the Premise as a Cross over.
To experience the world in a new body and with new eyes can be very exciting.

There is a point I could make more evident as the story progresses, chapter by chapter.
From the perspective of acquing the details in this setting, when would you see as the best time?
We are not limited to reading books, listening to audio files or such limited media in this context.

Nice story. But is the name of the protagonist Ballerina or Mai?

6197207 Thanks.
On that note, both.
Different locals, and different names.

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