just a guy who likes crossing MLP over into things it really shouldn't
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When two strange metallic pods crash land in the jungles of the Zebra Nation, Princess Luna takes both Daring Do and Twilight Sparkle to investigate.
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When Ciedes escape pod crash lands on a technologically sub-par planet he must hunt down the criminal who destroyed his home.
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(MLP/Predator crossover)
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Not bad. Still, you may want to double space between paragraphs and shorten those walls of text.
5614642 Thanks for both the comment and the advice
Not bad, i like it.
5614712 As my first thumbs up you receive a grand total of four, that's right FOUR, Pinkie smiles:
5614726
Thank you
Interesting so far. You just need to pay more attention to (the few) spelling errors. For one you should re-read the very last sentence of the first chapter till you see whats wrong.
Hmm, you have me interested. Cant wait to read more
5614809 Well that's jarring. Imma go ahead and fix that.
The hiatus is for a very simple reason. I want the second arc to be completely complete before I continue to post. Yeah, I know I should've had the whole thing done before I posted chapter 1 but now I know.
Don't worry take your time don't rush your self BUT I do enjoy the chapter though
5660575 Thank you very much
5616373 She decided to take Daring Do and Celesias student there/ btw you mised it
durp
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I literally only have four chapters left in this thing and i cant even finish writing them. Writers block sucks
THAT WAS AWESOME! I can't tell you how much I've nerded out over the first few chapters! And you did both Predators justice. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
6996098 Thanks! The last four chapters are being written, it's just taking some time with work, school, and other writing projects.
An enjoyable story so far. I'll be sure to keep an eye on it.