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Mister E


Eclectic observer of the odd, and the esoteric.

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This story is a sequel to Story Time With Zecora or How Twilight Turned Every Pony Bald


Zecora tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders of the time that Fluttershy really let her hair down...


Second story of the Story Time series.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

I thought that this was a rather good start to a story. I actually like the style that you have written it in. Are you going to use this style for the remainder of the story because I liked this method it felt more story like, like you were actually there sitting in front of Zecora and hearing her actually saying this. I shall be adding this to my favourites most definitely as this is indeed worthy of tracking!

I shall be looking forward to hearing more from this tale when you update it!

-frost:pinkiehappy:

[rhyming review? here I go again, as well :twilightsmile:]
Once again I'm amazed,
by the rhymes, you manufactured..
my eyes had them chased.
They've been clean and structured.

Your story is delightful,
what else would it be?
It's been written pretty mindful;
Your stories always bring glee.

Speaking of glee, that you surely have had.
Writing in this pattern would drive anyone mad.
The ABAB pattern is harder than I thought.
So every readers respect should be yours, I'm sure it won't be for naught.

Keeping that form,
Over as long as you did.
Surely is not norm,
and the difficulty you well hid.

Reading your story
it is light as a feather,
flowing along it's glory;
for the reader no breather.

Though this time,
negative this is not.
It is like good wine,
only sometimes it's top!

And with that I end my review,
of that newest story of yours.
I am awaiting the next chapter
and I'm sure astounding it will be anew.

5602513 Thank you for the kind words and fav! :pinkiehappy:
Yes, I do intend to write the entire story in this style. It isn't easy by any means especially with interactive rhyming dialog, so I'm taking my time. If you like this one, check out the first Story Time With Zecora as well. :raritywink:

CLOOOOOWN SHAAAAARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You rhyming is far better
than mine, my friend.
This is fun to the letter,
Hopefully it'll be long till it's end. :twilightsmile:

Are they all going to turn into bears?

5616866 Well, I don't like to give anything away, but I'm sure someone will have to remain un-bear-able. :raritywink:

It will likly end with Zecora managing to create a cure, just before the werebears breach the house and cause Twilight and Zecora to become werebears themselves. Thus leaving it up to Spike to cure them all. Which he probly succed due to the werebears claws and teeth being unable to penetrate he's scales. But then they would still have to worry about patient zero. AKA the bear that caused Fluttershy to turn.

It will likly end with Zecora managing to create a cure, just before the werebears breach the house and cause Twilight and Zecora to become werebears themselves. Thus leaving it up to Spike to cure them all. Which he probly succed due to the werebears claws and teeth being unable to penetrate he's scales. But then they would still have to worry about patient zero. AKA the bear that caused Fluttershy to turn.

5625793 Long time no see RW. You are partially correct, Zecora would be the go to gal for a cure, but as to who makes it through... well, a few surprises next chapter. :raritywink:
Also, when I went back and cleaned up Discord's Family Reunion a bit, I added a line just for you in reference to Carter, Kat, Jorge, Jun, and Noble Six. Just one line mind you... no major rewrites. Maybe something will happen with one of the sequel's, but not the NEXT one. Next one will be the Pirate one I've been putting off with Discord's Mom and Fluttershy. :yay:

You get a cookie just for that. Can't what for the continuation of Discord's family reunion! Oh and have you ever heatd about Red vs Blue?

5626460 Heatd? Pretty sure you were going for heard, if so, I've watched every episode up to season 12, and have 2 songs on my flash in my car to listen two while driving. The original opening of course 'Blood Gulch Blues' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=14Seger4c4U as well as 'Outpost Sunset' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C353wYKaziA
I always wanted to see a brony/pegasister with good animation skills animate 'Blood Gulch Blues' with Big Mac, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Carrot Top as the Reds, and Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Trixie, and Rarity as the Blues.:pinkiehappy:

Ya I meant heard. I hate how the letters are so close together on a phone keyboard. And sometimes my Brother and I would argue who would in a fight: Noble Six on Red team and Texas on Blue Team, and Red and Blue team would only have the items they possessd in the first few episodes. With myself always voting for Red while my Brother would vote for Blue.

With the information above regarding my current device. Could you please tell which chapter the edited line is on? Since it takes a while for fim fiction pqges to load on my phone.

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