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Raile21


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Nightmare Moon is back and she's not alone.

She has discovered the anti-thesis of elements of harmony and raises her own group and army to strike at Equestria.

Her first step was to abduct Celestia, Chrysalis determined to rescue her back have to defeat one of her lieutenants.

When Chrysalis failed she may have to ask Luna's help to rescue her sister and join forces with Equestria to defeat a common threat.

Not realizing that dragging the whole of Equestria was Nightmare Moon's plan all along.

Full Version of:

Chapter 1- State of Nightmare "The Bright Side of The Moon" : http://raile21.deviantart.com/art/State-Of-Nightmare-The-Bright-Side-Of-The-Moon-511039832

Chapter 2 - State of Nightmare "The Dark Side of The Moon": http://raile21.deviantart.com/art/State-Of-Nightmare-The-Dark-Side-Of-The-Moon-517018910

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Comments ( 5 )

A good story, but a lot of things are mentioned out of left field and the grammar's a bit lacking; this could really use an editor. Still, for a first story, not bad.

3/5 mustaches.
:moustache::moustache::moustache:

I was promised undead robots. I am severely disappointed.

Here i was, reading a nice Chrysalis x Celestia ship fic, then all of the sudden... Time travel! Zombies! Nightmare moon! Nightmare ponies!!!!! And Then!!!! A wedding???

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