a storm is coming.
After the events of the Canterlot wedding, princess Luna stands silently in the shadow of her sister Celestia still holding back the pain caused by her imprisonment to the moon.But things begin to change when Luna hears a voice one night telling her to betray her sister and to become Nightmare moon once more. Will she do it and will friendship and loyalty truly triumph over all? find out right here.
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This holds great promise. I eagerly await the next chapter.
EDIT:
WHAT ARE THESE SHENANIGANS!? HOW DID I GET FIRST ON THIS EPIC PIECE OF WORK!?
567479 Thanks means alot! I'm working on the next few parts the up coming days so thanks! :)
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567851 Lol done chapter two :D , guys please help me to improve my story! I need your Wonderfull views and opinions!!
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YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!
568292 Cheers man your awesome!!!
This chapter is riddled with spelling errors, not counting capitalizing and punctuation mistakes. Her is a list of mistakes involving words, I'll let you fix them in your own time.
First wall of text
First line - Wondering should be wandering
Second line - pored should be poured
Fifth Line - Seamed should be seemed
Seventh Line - her should be herself
Third wall of text
First line - knight should be night
Second line - Resonantly should be recently
Fourth wall of text
Fourth line - minuet should be minute
Fifth line - to tired should be too tired
Fifth wall of text
Sixth line - over crowed should be either overcome or overcrowd
Seventh Wall of text
Eight Line - Internal should be eternal
Grammar correction mode ended
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572143 Thanks man for pointing that out, I've never been that good with spelling anyways to be honest but thanks again!!!
You have my attention. Please continue to enthral me with this most interesting story.
576749 thanks man will do
The spelling/grammar mistakes...
Must... Not... Be... Grammar... Nazi
605910 I know sorry about this!! I'm going to correct most or all errors hopefully after I post chapter 5!!! again sorry for the inconvenience
hmm... its been added as a moonlight ship but i see no romance tag... so this is a friendship ship thingy?
616548 ow shoot I put it in the wrong one, soz about that
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So... it isn't a shipfic? fiske overboard! xD
617230 No it isn't sorry about that
, I must have put it in shipping instead of non but again soz about that!! 
Goddamn...
You should probably get an editor to help you with the, well, editing as there seems to be a number of mistakes which unfortunately lessen the overall quality of the story. the story itself is freaking awesome though! Also nice to see a non-shipping chrysalis fic. I mean, the girl supposedly lives on love, but you can only be shipped with OC's so many times...
617345 Thanks ,much appreciated!!!
I hope as I develop my writing that I will eventually be able to get an editor but thanks again!!! 
605910 Be one! get him to fix his mistakes! for us poor readers that show up after you!
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Hail grammar!
621439 I've removed as many mistakes as I can find, Anymore if you could alert me I will be happy to adjust!
update again soon please
644723 lol That's exactly what I'm doing at this very moment!
sorry that I've not been able to update for a while I've been really busy but now it's Friday I can alot more, so wish granted! 
i am intrigued please continue.
Edit: no FIRST
Moar pls?
664046 Trust me more's on the way! thanks for da support.
"With my combined power and you’re we can crush the elements of harmony." and you're is probably meant to be 'and yours' correct?
665957 Yep I've changed it thanks :)
this is getting real
Why is Celestia getting weaker?
714679 All will hopefully become clear in the final part of this story!!! but it's mainly because Chrysalis is draining her strength by an unseen spell which Chrysalis cast
well that was anticlimactic
That was.... Different... Unique... Short...
In my opinion, you rushed the ending a little, but I won't complain.