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I write silly stories about ponies. Beware

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Sometimes life is unfair and takes the things we love away from us. With Dinky gone, Derpy tries to make do. Will she pull herself out of it, or will her sadness over come her?

To those reading: Please, read all the way to the end. Trust me

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Comments ( 18 )

I... I... FEELS!

5548765

So long as one person gets the feels, my job has been done.

5548802 *calls* Lilian?
Lilian: Sup?
I are you free? I need one of my weapons, I need to kill these feels before I explode,
Lilian: Sure, I'll be there in a jiff*put down phone* Hey, Candi! I need you to babysit my little brother! Shine wants some more weapons!
Candi: The feels already killed her current ones? This is the third time this week!
Lilian: Can't be surprised, it's Shine. Oh, and say hi to my older brother for me*winks*
Candi:*blush*
Lilian:*picks up phone* I'm on my way!
:derpytongue2:

Sorry but I don't get it did Derpy die ?

5549075

Nope, shes alive. Just being over dramatic about a muffin.

*Gives you a hug* That was for writing a truly great story. *Punches you in the face* And that was for making me think Derpy was dead.

5549198

I love reactions like this. It hurts but so hood. Glad you liked it. You might also like my other one. Its over Here

Me at first: DINKY DEAD!?

Me in the middle: WAit dinky alive????, Muffin?? :applejackconfused:

Me at end: :facehoof:

I FEEL.... nothing.

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5549774

:pinkiehappy:

You both are very welcome

Hah! Well played. :rainbowwild:

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Thank you very much. I do try to keep things original and unpredictable around here.

:derpytongue2: muffin juice !

Finished reviewing story for the Goodfic bin, and whilst this certainly wasn't a bad story, it doesn't really do enough for it to make much of a lasting impact. For that reason, I'm rejecting it from the submissions folder.

Detailed explanation is here

I thought derpy had taken all the MEDICINE, and was dieing. I thought dinky came in at her mothers last breath. or that it was a last dream for ditsy, before she died. im glad the ending was a happy one. thank you!!!

5747722 XP yeah, I like trolling like that. After all, I couldn't be that mean to my favorite pony of all time. Though could you do me a favor and edit your comment with the SP bit so it doesnt spoil the ending for others?

If I get to the end and it turns out she's crying over a damn muffin, I will fucking slap you. :ajbemused:

5549774 My thoughts exactly... The tragedy tag is a lie.

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