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The Burglary at the Boutique

The Carousel Boutique had experienced a break in, and nopony knows who the culprit is! While Twilight Sparkle tries to console Rarity, the two receive a visit from the one pony who can solve this mystery; A detective from Trottingham.

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Winston #1 · Jan 24th, 2015 · · ·

There's a few minor grammar issues that could stand to be fixed, and the culprits were fairly predictable since it plays into the well-trodden canonical and fanfiction trope of Sweetie Belle causing massive disruption to her sister's home and work, but overall the story was well written.

I give it my thumbs up for being an enjoyable read.

EthanClark #2 · Jan 24th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks, friend! I figured there were some errors, considering I wrote this at 3 in the morning

Xanderfox #3 · Jan 24th, 2015 · · ·

More Twily and Sherlock? Yes please :)

Shadow_Wolf #4 · Jan 2nd, 2020 · · ·

Very enjoyable

Brony9216 #5 · Feb 17th, 2023 · · ·

It was really obvious who the culprit was from a meta perspective, but it was still a fun story.

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